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Havilah's reign of terror
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She was forced to marry the man her father chose for her, and just as she began to fall for him, she discover that she was pregnant for her old lover, read to find out what happens when the baby died by accident or was it murder?
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The story is great. Can develop in many ways, i.e., it has great potential. Author you're doing a great job. It's just that your characters do not have depth and your grammar is umm... a little weak. I'm sorry if it felt bad. But if you want to improve, I think you should write small essays on a subject. use Grammarly or word tune, though i never used either so I am really qualified to give this advice to you. But just don't stop. You can do it. You can tell your story to the world.
This story carries some easily intriguing aspects. It starts with an FL who is weak and broken, but we can easily expect to see her become so much stronger. The only thing that can be improved is the grammar here. Besides that, it was a nice read. Good job, author!
I love the story! It is unique and a story I could easily relate to. the story development and character design were nicely created. I hope the story goes on!
The storyline is pretty good, and the characters are good too but need a little more defining in their appearance, the story progression is pretty fun, best of luck author, you can do it.
The story is nice, I loved the plot which started off simple but gives a hint of certain scares as if something big is going to happen, can't wait to read more, great work ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
although this book has a very short synopsis have read more than half of it and it's surely a good book and worth giving a try, nice work author keep it up ♥️
Have really all the chapters and I definitely enjoyed every bit of it. The beginning was a bit dull but as the story progress so does the fun. Y'all should read this and leave nice review let's encourage the author.