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Harry Potter: Magic Re: CODED
Penulis: GrrodGroot2002
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After reincarnation in Potterverse, our MC begins his adventure in a new and exciting reality. Read for more if you are interested.
Disclaimer: All the characters in this novel belong to JK Rowling, I only have right's to my OC. If you are owner of this picture and want me to take it down please contact me.
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I honestly don't get it, you want to write a fic, then good for you, and the best of luck, but why would you write in a language that you're this bad at????? I couldn't even get past the first chapter; the grammar is horrible.
A bit too early for a review, but I have to get it out there that the grammar needs some serious work. I’m always down for a HP FF, but this is becoming frustating to read (having to correct every mistake in my head, sometimes having to add/subtract words or change words intirely so it makes sense). I’m only a few chapters in, so maybe you’ll go back to correct the mistakes or maybe the writing will get better as time goes on, but I can see the grammar being a turn off for many people causing them to leave and you to loose motivation due to that. Highly recommended to fix these mistakes so more people would give this fic a better chance. Good luck, hope to see some improvement.