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our mc John is an orphan who is a part timer oneday after rescuing a girl he was killed by a gunshot from criminal. he woke up to find a goddess who tells him that there is a fault in god's judgement and he gets reincarnated into the world of harry potter with a system.
he is excited to roam the world ,learn magic along with the system and get his love of life.
join the journey of our mc and see whether he could reach the pinnacle and get a beautiful girl or else die tragically.
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MC is hugging and kissing underage girls, and he is reincarnated and has a mind of a grown man Doesn’t make sense does it?
honestly very disappointed, the start was really good but the interactions of the main character with his friends I found unbearable, he only gets victimized all the time but does nothing and barely fights back. That's disappointed
can you upload more often i have been reading from the first chapter that was uploaded.
How old are you not to know that at the beginning of each sentence there is a capital letter, there are also many verbs that are in the present and should be in the past.
I like how the story is going and how the characters are developing and I find it a little funny that the main character keeps stumbling on to a new girl with meaning to and how his mom messes with him like dressing him girl clothes or how even the potter house elfs flee when she's angry the only thing I hate is that I want more chapters released faster I'm dying to know what happened next.
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hey author! I really loved your work. But sadly it is too short. please update more! Also please add more about goddess and Sara AI if possible.
Dude I swear to god I lost all my brain cells reading this and also congratulations you’re the first to receive a bad review from me🎉🥳
I like how the story is progressing and his need for knowledge instead of power like most protags and the story is funny in its own way so good job on the story keep up the good work, but the quality of the story could use some work
The story is raw, similar to a brief description of past episodes from the series. The work is needed in grinding, every character. The plot is banal, the actions of the parents' grief are the stupidest! how can you think of a shelter? Is there really no spell in this world of magic to hide a child from everyone except his parents! I don't believe it! Re-read, rewrite, and so on 7 times, until the story somehow resembles a story printed not by a five-year-old child, but by an adult.
I hope author will continue this novel, I really need more of this[img=recommend]
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Not readable. Sorry but this feels like a 5 year old wrote this....[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]