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Harry Potter and the Young Occamy's Path
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Here he was, Natsu Orion Flamel in the Harry Potter world. What is he going to do? Is he going to completely stay out of it or is he going to carve his own path? Let's find out!
P.S: Copyright of some characters in the book and the world is belong to J.K.Rowling. So now this shitty sentence out of way, enjoy!
P.P.S:English is not my native language, so I'm going to ask you to overlook some of my mistakes and grammer, especially with tenses. I mean, what's up with those tenses, it's always so confusing, it never feels right ,arggh! Anyway, enjoy! :)
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This author have no shame for giving himself five stars🤣 There will be some spelling mistakes, I'm not saying may be, I'm saying it will be , so i ask all of you to excuse me, thank you for reading ..
I'll premise this by saying I'm giving a high score because I haven't read a lot of the book, only around 6 chapters or so and I didn't want to give it a low rating having read very little. Now to the review, I like the idea and I usually like op mc's but this one feels far over unrealistic because of the amount of time he takes to do things. Learning he entire Hogwarts theoretical content in a year is highly unreasonable considering that the mc needs to sleep, eat, go to school (this might not be one of the things since he is a reincarnated person but maybe) and go to his fencing and martial arts classes. Another unreasonable display is with how he deals with the Dursleys, he's 8 and the Dursleys have been abusing Harry (a freak) for around 5 years now, why would they be afraid of another freak or an 8 year old in general. They're around 20 to 40 if I have to guess and the Dursleys can't be reported to the authorities either since Dumbledore will keep Harry with them in order to keep the blood ward or whatever it was. Either way I just felt it was a little too unreasonable for my tastes and its unfortunate that I'll be dropping this one but for others who like this dynamic, the grammar isn't too bad and the story seems somewhat interesting so far. Good Luck with the rest of ur book author-nim
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i thought mc would have natsu's powers from fairy tail, but sadly there is no conection :( .................................................
This is honestly the funniest Harry Potter story that I have read in a while. With their teasing, the Mc's funny ways of protecting Harry and just the overall wholesome energy, it is a delight to read.
I only want to know about the updating stability and also mcxfleur I makes sense and also write after he graduates and don't make him super bro con🙂🔪
Is the picture of the cover what the mc Occamys form looks like or is the picture of the cover just showing what an Occamy looks like and how does harry know what it is
For Author: I enjoyed your story so far, but kindly update For the readers: the content is so good, the MC is a brother con, there is rush yet, you will feel comfortable reading the story. Harry will be adored my MC and this story got what reader expect. ~ 99_DRAGONS
I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
love the book. like the goodness with the comdey of the book. really love the overpowered mc that learns all the spells and brings harry under his wind and makes him overpowered also. hope this book continues and goes further. i enjoy it too much even love there magic beast forms.
I have read till chapter 12 and liked the story so far, but I’m not a big fan of the brocon, I understand spoiling brother but he makes it excessive. Or how the main character interacts with the old coot Dumbledore. I’m fine with a not evil Dumbledore, but don’t tell him everything when he ask. What’s the point of occlumency if you aren’t even going to hide anything from the “For the Greater Good”. If you fix the telling Dumbledore everything and not being so excessive with brocon, then your story will be great.
They just make the mc way to overpowered he tries for 5 minutes and can do wandless magic its just really stupid and they give no reason for is opness either
Ah the mc is a bro-con and he is not a minor one at that though it would be better to make him a little less op while every thing else is 5 stars
Mc × fleur ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................