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Disclaimer I did not create or own this novel I have helped smooth out some of the translation but this story was created by 喵星人家的汪
I am only putting this on here because I enjoyed it myself and thought others might want to give it a read as well.
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Tulis ulasanLove the story but hate the fking premise behind it, for those who will try reaching it for the 1st time, do what I say right here and the story will be way better : forget everything about the MC being reincarnated and having read the books and u will find the story 100% more enjoyable... The MC has more than 25 years old (soul) and has knowledge about the story but he fking behaves like a 10 year old child that even after knowing that he is in HP world doesn't train nor tries to learn things that may help him... It annoyed me so much that I just gave up on trying to reason with his reincarnation Don't think I hate the story, I truly enjoy this story it has a different feeling cause MC actually goes adventuring with friends and all. It also has a great development in my opinion I just hate this premise because honestly I would love to be in his place but the story doesn't demonstrates that, in everything else it's one of the best fanfics for HP fans
awfully mediocre The MC is what you expect from a Mc from a Harry Potter FF, perfect, is always right, good looking, is overpowered, and take credits for things other characters did. The author change some things in the story like the fight against the basilisk, but in the end it was just the same. Like the majority of FF i saw, this one treats Ron like an idiot, even tho he is as smart as Harry. The dialogs are chessy and forced, there is sometimes where i think is going to be just a simple conversation and in the end turn out is a very long and boring coversations, that happens mostly in fights and the MC is always on the right side. Like i said before, the MC is too op, he is only in the second year of school and is already stronger than most students, and there ins't any development for that either. I'd said this FF have what any other generic FF of Harry Potter has, but is bellow average because the dialogs are way too cringe.
Membuka SPOILERwhile I was reading this fanfic I was hating every single moment. from no one considering logic to not even listening to the mc. and it is like every single thing that can go against the mc does.
I don’t like how mc sticks to the harry adn does everything stupidly like the original story gets into danger , it’s annoying . But thanks For translating the story.
a great fan fiction deviates from original story in a believable way original characters retain own personality and characters created by the fan are unique and well written but at the same time not overpowered very well done
Problem with this fanfic that it just doesn't make sense. Mc is supposed to be reincarnated and know the plot. But author basically decided to stick to original plot, so what happens is that mc is artificially made retard so he can't change to plot (even though story tells us he is smart). And any small changes that actually happen, get somehow corrected so that plot again steers to originals. Nothing just makes sense. Mc ignores obvious solutions to his problems, just so that author doesn't have to bother actually writing something original. Honestly story is actually written well, but problem is that even if you can write, it means nothing if the story you are writing is nonsense. Maybe the most plain example is Prisoner of azkaban arc. All mc needed to do is to secretly go stun Peter, give him sleep potion or something, and bring him to Dumbledore so Sirius name could be cleared. Mc's plans were really bad in first place, but every time there was actually chance to do something for some idiotic coincidence it didn't happen, all to somehow preserve original storyline. Like when he gave peter to ron when he was raging, or when the map was opened.
its a good fanfic considering all the other harry potter fan fics, but like the author made the characters cry way to much. from what i can remember theres like 6 scenes throughout all the movies where people actually cry, and a handfull in the books. way to emotional. But considering all the others its probably the best harry potter fan fic
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I think I've read this before and I'm sure there's machine translation of this fanfic as well. There's also evil gods in this if I'm not wrong, and how is the novel completed? This novel is far from completion and you have only posted translated chapters. I should be around 930+ chapter and I've put that on halt since 6 months because I want the translations to catch up. If you can, how about wording it better than machine translated and then post it? Remove the completed tag, its not completed.
Result- how to become a good side kick of Harry Potter ,that should be a title of the story.. he just replaces Ron with a better version . ................ .........................................................
If you want to read the fully translated story go to translatinotaku I just found it over there
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Stoopid stoopid. It was my fault for touching this pos. never touch a book under 4 star, this was my own fault, this is soo bad i dont even waste any more words. Just stay away, far far away.
The only good thing about this novel is, any semblance of the OG novel. The shoehorned MC just doesn't make sense and made everyone around him stupid by association. Also the glaring fact that this guy wants to start a journal buisness even before he started, but the worst part is everyone just joined along, no questions asked. Like bruh, you're not even suppose to leave Hogwarts during your first 2 yrs, wachagonna do with that?
its the kind of book that depends on the reader some may love it some may hate it as a hp ff connoisseur with specific tastes i dont particularly like it but it might be good for others
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why are you saying it's complete, this story has over a thousand chapters. it would be nice if you did the translation of the rest. most other traditions are shit.