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In the vastness of the Void the Forger works to create the worlds of peoples worlds and wishes. After an uprising and losing his wife, the Forger tries to take back what he lost. When the Forger discovers that his wife might be still alive, he starts making plans to save her. But when the time comes he finds out that the situation is graver than he first thought. So now he travels to the World in order to save what he holds dear.
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I do not own Harry Potter. J.K. Rowling does.
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Tulis ulasanThe Book is very good. The Writing makes me feel attracted to the story, because I like MC and also because he speak his mind. Genneraly i think this is a very good story, because the world building is carefully planed and very well thought out. And because of that i give it a 4.8
3. 8 from me for this story Good poitns Crafting even if it's gets a bit lost in the later chap. Some humor Out of the box storyline in HP world Negativs To much foreshadowing Power balance is all over the place Either make a Underdog Mc or an OP Mc bur this mixed mag sends mix massages, this hole Samuel the antagonistic villian that sends his minions and fucks with the worldlaws that the Mc made gives it a vibe of a bad 90's cartoon series. All in all the story is quit entertaining but just not my cup of tea
Membuka SPOILERAin’t this the dude who threatens old little cross with pitch forks.... HOW DARE YOU *COUGH* you should try pepper spray next time *COUGH* treat cross like that you should’ve *cough* burn him in the stake *cough* treated him better
This needs more attention. MOAR of this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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my opinion:Hope the author continues this fanfic my criticism(i might be allittle harsh but criticism is not betrayal but i really like this fanfic): The intro is confusing so I will break it down: Basically there is a dimension separate from Harry Potter Verse which is called the Void. The Void contains powerful creatures or existences which is our MC, the Forger, whom is married and the conflict is gathering the soul fragments that the main antagonist decides to mess up. Once this is cleared up, the reader who likes the slow well developed story will further appreciate this fanfic.
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Well... I drop it. For many reasons, one of them it that it's boring. But you know, it's good fan-fic, just not for me. But you can try it, it's free :D Maybe you'll like it.