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After a truck hits his house, Leo slowly bleeds out and dies.
Waking up, he finds himself being born again,
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"Congratulations Mrs Ignis, it's a boy!"
"I'll name you.. Leo. Leo Ignis."

Harry Potter Fanfic.

Average words / ch : 1.51K

Parents Strongly Cautioned

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Loyal_Hunter

If not even the author can give himself a shameless 5 star review then who can? This story may be trash, but it's my trash. ...............

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Uncle_Sheogorath

In my opinion below average. Pretty much cliche fanfiction. If you read one you read them all. Worst of all there's are a.....TALKING SYSTEM! The worst kind! It speaks like--- 'Hello, young one' like the fuk Lol?! Moreover, cliche dumbledore is apparently bad etc. It would be more unique to see the point of view of a pureblood society or something however here mc I feel is another pro muggle proud nonsense type character which is boring. ; Lastly, apparently, he is supposed to be a pureblood but is raised by muggles or something??-why not be a muggle-born then?!I want something different you know... :(

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Dayside
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Well written, close to 0 grammatical errors. Updates were pretty high for now, though I do expect it to drop a bit after the start. Story development is as generic as possibly can be so far. The main character has nothing interesting or unique about him. World background is just mostly canon HP with a few additions like the generic magic core thing and a few new families and one girl that isn't canon.

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Khors
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The story has good grammar and itโ€™s entertaining even though thereโ€™s only 3 chapters but Iโ€™m looking forward to reading more as you release it. Oh yeah if you ever need help editing I donโ€™t mind helping you out because I feel like this story and you have a lot of potential.

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AAM0825

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ great, I hope you don't drop

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CalciumLurcher

Writing quality: pretty good in the first place compared to allot of the stuff I've read, it gets better further into the book. Barely any mistakes in grammar either. Stability of updates: good, a little bit unstable with gaps every now and then that only last a few days. Story development: amazing, delves into the world it's set in and even builds up more. Character design: great, for once the characters actually feel like real people and act like a real person unlike many other books that make the side-characters cater to the mc every whim and seem to only exist for the mc. world background: the author mentions unnecessary characters and makes it apparent that the world isn't halted around the mc and that there is other stuff happening that the mc isn't apart of. it gives a sense of realism that you don't get with other books that pretend that only the stuff that is happening around the mc is important. it shows that there is more going on than what you see.

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Kurumi21

Thanks for the good work ! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ

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Grass_Cutter

Very good I like the concept ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Shannon1223

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ great, I hope you don't drop

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HorizonCrown

(หต อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐหต)(โ‰ก^โˆ‡^โ‰ก)ใƒพ(๏ผพ-๏ผพ)ใƒŽห™หšสš(ยดโ—ก`)ษžหšห™(โ‰งโˆ‡โ‰ฆ)/(โยดโ—ก`โ)o(ใ€ƒ๏ผพโ–ฝ๏ผพใ€ƒ)oโœบโ—Ÿ( อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐ)โ—žโœบ(หต อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐหต)(หต อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐหต)(โ‰ก^โˆ‡^โ‰ก)ห™หšสš(ยดโ—ก`)ษžหšห™( โœงะ”โœง) YES!!( โœงะ”โœง) YES!!(โ‰งโˆ‡โ‰ฆ)/(โยดโ—ก`โ)o(ใ€ƒ๏ผพโ–ฝ๏ผพใ€ƒ)oo(ใ€ƒ๏ผพโ–ฝ๏ผพใ€ƒ)oโœบโ—Ÿ( อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐ)โ—žโœบโœบโ—Ÿ( อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐ)โ—žโœบโœบโ—Ÿ( อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐ)โ—žโœบ(โ‰ก^โˆ‡^โ‰ก)(หต อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐหต)(โ‰ก^โˆ‡^โ‰ก)ใƒพ(๏ผพ-๏ผพ)ใƒŽใƒพ(๏ผพ-๏ผพ)ใƒŽห™หšสš(ยดโ—ก`)ษžหšห™(โ‰งโˆ‡โ‰ฆ)/(โ‰งโˆ‡โ‰ฆ)/(โ‰งโˆ‡โ‰ฆ)/(โยดโ—ก`โ)o(ใ€ƒ๏ผพโ–ฝ๏ผพใ€ƒ)oโœบโ—Ÿ( อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐ)โ—žโœบโœบโ—Ÿ( อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐ)โ—žโœบโœบโ—Ÿ( อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐ)โ—žโœบ(หต อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐหต)(โ‰ก^โˆ‡^โ‰ก)ใƒพ(๏ผพ-๏ผพ)ใƒŽห™หšสš(ยดโ—ก`)ษžหšห™ห™หšสš(ยดโ—ก`)ษžหšห™ห™หšสš(ยดโ—ก`)ษžหšห™(โ‰งโˆ‡โ‰ฆ)/(โ‰งโˆ‡โ‰ฆ)/(โยดโ—ก`โ)o(ใ€ƒ๏ผพโ–ฝ๏ผพใ€ƒ)oo(ใ€ƒ๏ผพโ–ฝ๏ผพใ€ƒ)oโœบโ—Ÿ( อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐ)โ—žโœบโœบโ—Ÿ( อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐ)โ—žโœบ(หต อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐหต)(หต อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐหต)(โ‰ก^โˆ‡^โ‰ก)(โ‰ก^โˆ‡^โ‰ก)ห™หšสš(ยดโ—ก`)ษžหšห™ห™หšสš(ยดโ—ก`)ษžหšห™(หต อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐหต)(โ‰ก^โˆ‡^โ‰ก)ใƒพ(๏ผพ-๏ผพ)ใƒŽห™หšสš(ยดโ—ก`)ษžหšห™( โœงะ”โœง) YES!!(เน‘หƒฬตใ€€แด—ใ€€ห‚ฬต)ูˆ(โ‰งโˆ‡โ‰ฆ)/(โยดโ—ก`โ)o(ใ€ƒ๏ผพโ–ฝ๏ผพใ€ƒ)oโœบโ—Ÿ( อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐ)โ—žโœบ

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tabishreza

Why ,Why , why ,why are you not uploading the chapters . Pls don't drop it . Waiting for next chapter . ....................................

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Ted007

Good story. Explore more of the magic side and other characters. Very interesting and easily addictive one you read it. Only wish for More updates Now.

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Jess_H_C_O

This is a really good book. I mean this author put alot into its background, story plot, and it's character development. though I do wish that we see the side characters like the weasley's a little more, or the "friends" the character has.

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Bralrox

Es el primer fanfic del universo de Harry Potter,y me gusto mucho,el personaje principal es serio pero con sus toques de humor,en perfecto equilibrio,en conclusiรณn:Un buen fanfic

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usui1202

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Henrique_Paiao

๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜„

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neguin

Good.................... ................................................................................,.................................................................................................

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Will_Caruso

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ great, I hope you don't drop

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Phoenix1998

This is becoming so good author. Cant wait for more to read.This is becoming so good author. Cant wait for more to read.This is becoming so good author. Cant wait for more to read.

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Phoenix1998

Looks good. Grammar is neat. Plot is progressing well. The MC is likeable. The chapters are good. And the update rate is consistent. Cant wait to read more from you author.

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