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Harem insect women (+18)
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Warning: History contains swearing and adult content!
(NOTE: HISTORY TRANSLATED FROM PORTUGUESE TO ENGLISH BY GOOGLE TRANSLATOR)
My name is Romeo, I am one of the greatest entomology scholars in the world and I am respected for my research, but one day there was an explosion in one of the UFRJ laboratories and I think I ended up dying?
Wait where am I? And why has an ant woman on top of me? Reincarnated Would these fantasy worlds be? Where I am?
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Even thought I gave this a low overall rating it is still really good. I just think this story need more focus, maybe English speaking editor and longer chapters. But over all this idea and story are really good so far.
It's a nice story, but couldn't you add leveling and evolution system. I mean how are we going to tell he is getting stronger. But regarding everything else it's good.
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Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong๐๐๐
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong๐๐๐
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Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong๐๐๐
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong๐๐๐
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Reviewer: your grammar sucks. Writer: hey **** you, it was a styistic... Reviewer: no, it wasn't a stylistic choice just lazy writing. Why the **** am I using the bull**** narration style now. The reviewer turned away angrily from the writer. "It was a good idea. I like harem stories." He slammed his fist into the wall. "But you couldn't write a fucking grammatically correct sentence for prose," the reviewer stomped away leaving the reviewing room. "I can't deal with this ****." The reviewers voice faded as he left. Writer: well ****... The reviewer slammed back into the room. "That, that right there is what I mean! Use quotation marks. Did you learn how to write by reading plays!", the reviewer screamed. Writer: what do you mean... "Nope, try again," the reviewer chastised. "Do you mean like this?," the writer asked. The reviewer turned back to the writer. "Yes, is it really so hard?," he asked. "No, but I had a vision...," the writer responded. "Look, correct grammar usage is there for everyone's benefit." The reviewer sighed and leaned up against a table. "Without it, it just looked like an idiot wrote your story. Use it, for everyone's sake."
The story was interesting and not cliche. Also the main characters were unique but your chapters needed editing because their were a lot of mistakes. So far it's great.
Eu curti essa novel. Sim, eu sou Br entรฃo deu pra entender porque vocรช usou o Google tradutor. Bem, ficou esquisito pra krl, mas se vocรช trocar as palavras em inglรชs para portuguรชs da para entender. A histรณria e os personagens ficaram bem legais e satisfatรณrios, entรฃo eu vou colocar na minha livraria. Eu vou acompanhar! Ah, e eu sugiro que vocรช arranje um tradutor ou (e) editor para a sua novel. Eu sei inglรชs entรฃo quando eu li a sua novel, ficou um troรงo sem nexo difรญcil de entender.
Well it is a story about a guy who is so smart that he has girls following behind him all along and just like any harem main character he kinda ignored them . He even got into various trouble because of following women soon by magic he gets pulled into a magical world and that's where the story begins This is eventuall
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