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When a fat man that did nothing but waste his time to prove himself created a hacking system that could hack anything on the internet, but just when he was about to rejoice he got struck by lightning and woke up to find something that only he could see.
[ DING ! OBTAINED THE HACK SYSTEM ]
[ FIRST GIFT : CHOOSE A POWER FROM ANY CHARACTER YOU WANT ! ]
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I don't know how to reply to your comments. Is there a option ? I am new to writing. I WILL IMPROVE AND MAKE MYSELF BETTER. I JUST WANTED TO BRING OUT SOMETHING THAT ISN'T ANNOYING AND JUST LET'S YOU READ IT WITHOUT FRUSTRATIONS. I THINK PEOPLE SHOULD JUST TAKE IT AS A TIME PASS AND DON'T TAKE IT SERIOUSLY BUT I WILL IMPROVE
1. Too fast and i bet anyone other than author reads it will not able to undersantd even 2% of the things that happen 2. .Overpowered MC is understandable but if you can't even know how MC get these power than there is no fun in reading this. 3. Other characters that are introduced (like goddess and person who make fun of MC) have no character development or any other information after mentioning them once.
You must stop doing this. I mean the story to fast paced isn't? He got a hacking system (although he wasn't used it to hacking something, but to bought a magic, is it a fantasy store system or hacking system?) And get revenge to an unknown man, after that he goes to FT world and suddenly got Acnologia's dragon slayer magic? i hope you can make an improvement soon...
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