/ Fantastique / Gravity Mage with Level-Up System
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In the age of interstellar exploration, three hundred years ago, Mage explorers from the yellow river planet took their first step towards outer space.
It was a joyous event for every mage on that planet, yet unfortunately, space is dominated by other races.
The Peak level Mage from the Yellow River Planet was the weakest power in existence among other outer space races. It's a cruel reality for everyone.
From then on, every mage from the Yellow River Planet began to increase their power level by consuming outer space resources.
Then they constantly researched, upgraded the power level system and tried to pave the way for the next generation of space explorers.
Now, our MC Vincent Carey's ambition is to be the next generation of space explorers.
How is he going to increase his strength and compete among other races to get resources?
How is the unknown little yellow river planet going to be known and feared by others?
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It looks interesting. Expecting new chapters in a regular interval like other novel of your. So for now the characters and the plot looking good and waiting for the new chapters..
Good Writing Quality and Updating stability BUT the Author doesn't know how to pace, it took like 200 chapters to get to level 2 limiter and then the MC suddenly flew past level 3, 4 and 5. The author doesn't know how to make a stable academy story line and the factions are all hostile to the MC which is kind of ridiculous. Instead of creating a good story of interweaving plots, the author puts a lot of useless filler chapters and even intentionally putting the whole character status again and again in a chapter to increase word count. Overall, the author has potential but you need more reading, just think quite a bit for a good intellectual plot rather than creating trivial fillers. My words might sound harsh but trust me from a veteran reader and writer 😉
I don't know why I found his master piece this late but god am I thankful I found this today. Love the story, the powers and the villain mc
The plot and story line seems rather interesting and refreshing, since the book is all about a "Mage with a system". Author has done a great job in creating relatable characters and story arcs. There was something so attractive and intriguing about the story that kept me hooked. When it comes to world build-up and detailing, author has outdone his previous works 👍👍👍 Looking forward to read more about Vincent's journey to become a great mage as well as a super Villain 😈
The story is quite nice, I love how the author explained many of the terms as this can make things a bit confusing so knowing what you are reading about is helpful. I am looking forward to what will happen in the future and this is a good read.
I'm about 600 chapters deep and I have enjoyed it so far however there are glaring issues that I'm finding harder to ignore. My biggest issues: 1. Antagonist motivation/logic 2. Utilization of gravity magic So far conflict is summarized like this: Does MC exist? Yes. Then he deserves death... I get antagonist need to exist but it just doesn't make sense sometimes. His own side is trying to kill him for merely existing and everyone else criticizes MC for literally just existing. There are other talented people but no one goes after them. MC's biggest mistake is just existing. There are other more talented people but NO ONE attacks them. I realize it's because of MC is the MC but it's pretty hard to keep reading when literally everyone (including his own side) is trying to kill him. Fights (especially for the first 200 chapters) are summed up with: "Gravity Field". No nuance and intelligence behind MC. I'm all for OP MC's but it would be cool to see him fight and utilize his power in creative ways but it's literally just spam a move and win (which is fine occasionally but why give him other spells if he isn't going to ever use them or find a use for them like gravity push or pull). Fights could be so much more interesting. For example if he fought hand to hand and during the fight uses gravity push to alter the direction of the opponents punch. Or literally anything other than spamming the same move for 200 chapters. Later it gets replaced with another spam move. That being said, I have enjoyed this as a brain rot type of story. I just wish there was more character motivation. Why does his own side want to kill him? Why does literally everyone hate him for just existing when there are other characters in the story who are supposedly more talented? Why does the MC even want to be there? Slightly entertaining story. Good for brain rot.
Other than grammar and first 200 chapters being a slog It's a great story. My advice is to just skip whatever stuff Mc is not involved in. Especially in the first 200 chapters. Story really picks up after them.
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This is a great novel, character design and development, only downside to this great Nobel is the grammar, at times it feels broken and ruins the immersion us readers have in the novel. Grammerly is a great tool to fix grammatically incorrect sentences. I believe with better editing this novel will shine in webnovel.