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GOT: A New Path - A New Song
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///A man who transmigrates into jon snow's body, leaving behind the title of bastard of Winterfell, and living as a real Dragon.///
A man has an opportunity to live a new life, the kind of life he has always sought and in a world, he has always enjoyed reading about and watching.
He transmigrated into the body of the young man known as Jon Snow, with some advantages to help him become a true Dragon, seeking revenge for his dead family and finding the path of life that he always sought but never got in his former life.
Watch Jaehaerys Targaryen's quest to bring the Dragon Family back to life and seek that which belongs to him by blood right, and if his enemies get in his way during his quest, it will be fire and blood that put him in the place he is due since his birth.
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Excellent writing! I love the direction of the plot so far - I hope you continue with this work. Write for those of us who love the story "as is"! To me, a writer loses their creativity and control of their work when they try to fix what the negative comments say is wrong i.e. writing for those who want to change it. I hope I didn't "overstep" in my comments but I noticed low ratings that I didn't understand the "why". All online writers have my utmost respect because they have the courage to write and let the world read it!!
its rather well written languagewise. some minor formating errors here and there. Story development in the early chapters has mostly drama, angst and planning. pretty much also extra oc since its a mixture of souls and original character got influenced from jon and got much emotional baggage with it. preset of the story seems interesting but the logic is kinda bad honestly especially with the tagaryen restoration... sorry to say but if thats a priority for him single wife and LI is stupid with a male lead. Since he can have more children that way and repopulate the bloodline better. Ok with Dany but he kinda has to get to her before drogo... kinda screwed herself there with getting pregnant and loosing the ability to have children soo no more tagaryens as single ppartner hich cant have children kinda screwss that hard. the revenge part is still possible though.
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