/ Urban / God's Game: I Can Alter My Appearance
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"Wow, I never expected my first hickey to be from a used cigarette…"
Axle was a thoroughly shut-in loner.
His friends compared him to a baby elephant, while his family didn't give a fuck about him. But, one day by a stroke of luck, his life changed when he heard a mysterious voice in his head.
Calling itself a god, the voice rewarded Axle with his biggest desire... A system.
[You have been chosen as an HEIR to an unknown god.]
[You have received MYSTIC CHANGE SYSTEM]
[Host chosen, Host; Axle.]
[Initializing synchronization…]
[System is synchronized. Welcome to the Mystic Change System, Host.]
With the ability to alter his appearance, Axle's life changed.
But, with great powers, comes great responsibilities...
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The cover is AI generated
MC might come off as a little moronic rarely, but that is to make it more 'realistic'.
Yeah, thinking of making a bullshit fantasy realistic... I need help...
Hope you enjoy my novel!
I would appreciate all the support, thank you!
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Tulis ulasanIf you thought I might rate myself below 5 stars, geez you are dumb! /jk cough- I don't wanna call my readers dumb but jokes aside, feel free to ask me any questions regarding my humble creation! thanks for the support!
it's a nice story so if u r thinking about reading it, READ IT. it doesn't have any stupid grammar mistakes, or cliches that can make ur blood boil and brain freeze, so keep on reading. plus author's a nice guy so he deserves all the love and support
Its good but it feels like its lacking something, like uhhh idk how to explain it but keep up the good work! make sure to add more details.
Being honest. I had zero expectation when starting reading(cause of the author himself cough). The first few chapters, I didn't really like how the system was given. However, after a few chapters. I enjoy the bits of comedy here and there, and how it slowly progress and the light hearted theme (so far as I'm reading idk how long it will remain this way). So I can't wait to see how the story slowly develops more. (Author you better continue this or I spam your notifications.)
the book is written very well. I read through the first 5 chapters without even realizing it. The mc is not the best but i am definitely looking forward to seeing the character development!! Overall, it's a good read and I definitely recommend it.
Interesting Up to the uploaded 9 chapters the con is a little bit grammer i guess? but not that much, the flow is decent and plot is nice
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Hey hey hey hey! This book is about a fat and shy otaku getting handsome and strong with his system! I understand you guys are so excited over this that your fat dancing alongside with you, but wait a second and listen to me. Yes, there is more, the mc even has an online girlfriend that is obsessed with him! Woohoo! Exciting right? Sorry but not sorry, you guys' only girlfriend is your dominant hand and lotion. But! At least you can find hope while reading this book! Maybe, I mean maybe, you guys even get a girlfriend (in your dreams) too!