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Meet Law, younger brother of God Serena he will carve his way into this world with the power of Gods and Devils, and who stand in his path better be careful. He is not that kind with enemies. (OP in time, Harem, AU in some minor aspects to accommodate with the story in some details, multiple powers MC)
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the idea is new and dope..god serena's young bro..its dope. but one thing I will say is MC is too weak considering all the **** he has inside him, he should be easily able to oneshot anyone in his generation, [what I am trying to tell is that MC is neutered despite him having so many powers]......other than that, the stories nice...only suggestion is a OP MC , like **** you OP level, dude has 12 lacrimas inside him, each has godlike potential....add some romance and fluff..just build it, dont make it shallow and ****ty, the harem dont make it massive and no wives/moms, anyway GL...... **: for moon devils layer [or whatever it was]..the power of kyoka suigetsu might be intresting, and for choas...the power of gravity would be nice