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Jigen traveled through the world of pirates, got lost on a deserted island, activated the technological system, and created hermit seeds as the first reward.
He was worried about how to get out of that place when a shadow fell from the sky, lamenting having survived.
Kaido: "Do you dare to call this bean an invention?"
Jigen: "It can restore all wounds."
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Translation: Chinese-English
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Tulis ulasanIf I had a dime for every fanfic of Kaido recruiting a scientist I've read I would have two dimes which isn't much but its weird it happened twice
Typical of Chinese novels, they describe one scene ten thousand times with different pov. Waste of words and chapters. Imagine reading a paragraph 10 times and each time you read it in a different voice, that is majority of the novel so far.
I didn't like everything that started to happen after Kaido headed to Marineford. It's so stupid that I'll just leave my assessment, say nothing more and leave.
A very good translation.I have read the MTL up to chapter ~200 and it's a good story.It is hard to follow the MTL unless you have a deep knowledge of One Piece AND how Chinese novel translation works.This work here, is a perfect balance.Storywise: An interesting work that does justice to the original work's characters with fun twists.You'll have to deal with a bit of technology fluff paragraphs, but it's almost non-stop action in-between each invention.
Here's an advice, don't plagiarize. So you tweaked some things here and there, so what? You think we won't notice? Tsk, tsk, tsk, you silly melon. You don't have a skill check in sneaking and you never will. Now take this down, you disgusting scum of a plagiarizer. PS: There's a lot more of us incoming, so make like a League of Legends player in a losing game, and forfeit.
It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! I like it!!! ๐๐๐ It have a great story/plot and quite good english/translate (there"s only a few wrong translate, it improvment then the other author story).. I like that MC/Jigen have an interesting system.. It interesting to see how his technology make Beast Pirates more teryfing.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san ๐๐๐๐
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A captivating story, full of emotions and twists, impossible to put down! keep it up. by the way can you give me the original name of the story I can't find it thank you in advance
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New translation, I hope you like it. This story has many grammatical errors and mistakes with the names of characters, techniques, etc. I don't understand why they call the Tobirropos Fei Lubao. For this reason, it's difficult for me to translate, so for now, I will update one chapter daily. You would help me a lot by supporting me on my Patreon.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]