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Foundation Of Talents
Penulis: King_Of_Choas
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Throughout the world's beyond the one of the story one name still remains scarred in the memories of Gods and demons [A Elrod] the founder of Edo and the Elrod family
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Tulis ulasan
Overall it being your first work is understandable. The Little bits of Information before the start of the chapter was Good touch as it allowed us readers to understand it a little bit. But the chapter seemed to be a little bit to short and overall the tone was a bit rushed and just the atmosphere was little different with the characters reactions being bit bland and not expressed to well, but overall it decent for a new author, Welcome to World of Web-Novels!