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Final Battle Won in one piece , System Just Activated
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I have already fought the final battle in the Valley of Gods, but the system is only activated?
An inexplicable time traveler, who killed all the pirates with his natural holy body. Just after being surrounded by the top navy and pirates in the Valley of God, the system awakened! [The Road to Power 1: Face the Straw Hat Boy who will become the Pirate King in the future, be brave! ] [Mission details: Please defeat the 17-year-old future Pirate King Monkey D. Luffy! ] Looking at the black-haired Garp in his prime, Allen only wanted to ask one question. "Are you dumb?"
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Thank you my friend, the work is excellent. I will give you advice if you are the original writer of the story, try to make the character a teacher instead of a fighter at least during the first stage, through the last chapters it is clear that you will gather a small crew including the two sisters it is better to give them a good fruit with a base type Paramesa such as a ghost fruit or an identity fruit (Nojiko) or a higher nature such as a storm fruit or a mirage fruit (Nami), as for the suggested members there is (Tashigi) she will be good as a swordsman especially if she is trained in Haki and in the same city (Carmen) a cook who appeared as a rival to Sanji in the anime, (Conis) from Skypiea with a musical instrument fruit or a healing fruit (an alternative to Chopper if you do not get it) and in the same place (Raki) as a potential sniper with a suitable Paramesa fruit or without but with advanced Haki. Thank you again and I expect the best from you 🔥