Fate/Rebirth

LV 5

heavenlydogdog

I like this novel I realy do My only problem is the harem Why can't the main character go to a brothel or something instead of going after girls who unrealistically accept to be in a harem.

LV 3

HOT_potato

Honestly, this would be a fantastic novel if the author didn't rush through everything. Not enough detail and many MANY grammar mistakes and plot holes. It was a good idea... But this novel just doesn't have a good storyline if you know what I mean. Everything is predictable and the normal canon characters all don't act like they REALLY would. Though at times they would be similar the are simply too many unexplained details in the story. Like how does Rin love the MC? How is the MC going to explain how he knows all the names of the servants and who they are? Why do the others not question him? AND Really why does the author NOT go back and fix grammar mistakes? Like he even spelled author wrong... I am simply speechless...

LV 5

Helel

A wish fulfillment story about an immature idiot with the most forced romance I've ever seen on this site told in completely broken english, sprinkled with japanese words instead of well established terms to make the story completely unreadable.

LV 5

Zaelum

First Review! From ME! HAHAHA, well... I think this novel, has potential as a form to accomplish ours fantasies about getting the waifus of the world of Fate. Right now I have a few chapters, and I don't know to where is heading but, well, I hope is good, hahaha. My first goal will be to learn to write well! My grammar sucks, as English is not my native language, but it will get better! Goodbye and hope you guys enjoy it.

LV 5

HatoYin

Is a self fulfilment fanfic written by a Japanese author... who might have anger venting issues or have seventh grade syndrome... ...........

LV 3

enryuuuuu3

stupid dumbass and bastard. fanfic is useless. hypocrite.FANFIC TRASH !!!!

LV 13

SangN123

Okay I see a add in character that has blood relation to MC and he be rad man recantation on the go. He changes some important events here... I see harem oh that some aces for this series! Also how ya gonna interact with OG MC servant... kinda be wild on that part since... na ya got the skills. Look out for the male servants they be out the picture or no comment?

LV 2

black_dark

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LV 3

MADNES

I really like the power system but the the there many plot holes. No character depth. The flow feels so forced. It MC is so Ooc from his background story and thing go downhill after he gets his waifu.. Last is. Its a harem but there's limit to of people he can take to go to another dimension? So what the point of getting harem? Overal good cringe story..

LV 4

Mastertrix

Need more Author keep writing this is one of the best harem I had seen 👏😭👏😭👍👍👍👍👍 I am waiting for a lemon scene with all the wife's from nasuverse 🙏🙏🙏🙏😉

LV 14

wisdomseeker

I always give 5 stars for Fate/ Fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 4

ProProcrastination

The only fate fanfiction that I am actually enjoying. I like his magic. Its very cool and the author explains his actions quite well. And the best thing is ALOT OF CHAPTER RELEASES! Keep it up mr.author I got your back :)

LV 11

EijiSeishuu

Ok 5 Star ........... Continue.............. . ..............................................................................................................................................

LV 13

JuriKier

The dots “…” are so overused and to me it just ruins the story since every paragraph I read has atleast 2 to 3 of just “…”, and I read with an audible voice reading for me in my head so to me, there’s just constant pausing while the characters are talking and it screws up my focus on the story or immersion into it.

LV 4

I_LIKE_SWORDS

To be honest, I thought I found a really good and unique aotry, but nope, it's just one of those fanfics with a lot of plot holes, and bad grammar all over it.

LV 14

XSilentX

I couldn’t go past a couple chapters the grammar just sucks and wasn’t showing improvement , author proge read your chapters and install grammerly it would make it 10x better

LV 4

Suzaku_

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LV 14

JRT02

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