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Icarus. The First hollow Human to desire nothing. Not women, not being rich, not power, no nothing!
The mysterious Human who made God's think twice before going to the Mortal world. The First Human to obtain immortality.
The...... First Human turned God.
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Tulis ulasanThe writing is good, I have found no spelling mistakes also the English is good, the Grammar is also good. However the story is not for me, its not my cub of tea if you will. Even if the story is not for me i wont bomb it like many like to do in starting new stories. However if the Author keep this quality up, I'm sure the story will become good. Therefor I give the story a 4.2 in stars.
I really like the idea, I was attracted by your synopsis. Please don't drop this, it has potential.
The writing mode is interesting I have already read another icaro fanfic in fate luckily and great work by the writer-san they don't look alike I am intrigued by the magic that the protagonist can develop considering the legend of icaro and the lore of fate I am excited hehe
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As the Author of this Fanfic, it's obligated to give myself Five stars. Anyway I'll answer every question asked in the comment section. I'll advise new comers that they MUST NOT Vote or provide power stones to my old fic. Only this one must you Vote, Comment and review it. Nonetheless. I'll continue with my business. First, I'll answer the most asked questions.. "Will there be a harem?" That's hard to answer cause the vision I had for this fic was for Icarus And few people to be the main focus in this fic. "Is this fic fast paced?" personally, I think it's slow as f*** That's one of the reasons I'm rewriting this fic. "Will there be romance?" If you're reader of my Previous novel, then you'll know that yes. There'll be Romance. "Will Icarus be Op?" This is the Nasuverse in the past. there are gods, divine beast, magic and many more. so it goes without saying that he will be Strong. But without Stomping anyone in an instant. "Will the Age of the God's reach the main timeline or will the Atlas Lostbelt happen?" Hm~ difficult to answer cause I didn't think that far, but I've thought of a alternate solution for the ending of this fic. If you have answers plz, ask! This is Godfire Signing off for now.