/ Fantasy / Fate's Bloody Path
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"I lost the only person who ever made me feel whole. She was taken from me without reason, and since then, I've been a shadow of who I once was. In my desperation, an enigmatic being appeared in my dreams, offering me the impossible: the chance to be reborn in different eras, with the promise of finding her again. But with each rebirth, I feel something inside me slipping away, and I don't know how much longer I can hold on."
Darius, broken by grief and loss, is pulled into an endless cycle of lives that defy everything he knows. In each era, he faces mythical creatures and supernatural forces that test not just his strength, but his very soul. Guided by mysterious forces, his fate becomes intertwined with the worlds he touches, where every choice he makes alters the future of entire civilizations.
With each rebirth, a part of him fades as the chaos within him grows. The entity that guides him has infused him with this chaos for reasons he has yet to uncover, using him as a pawn in a cosmic game that threatens more than just his life—it risks unraveling the very eras he visits.
What will Darius do when he learns the truth behind this enigmatic being? Can he find his lost love, or has he been merely a piece in a much larger game of deception and betrayal? Time is running out, and with each rebirth, the stakes grow higher—not just for Darius, but for reality itself.
**English is not my native language, so I use a translation tool to help with my writing. Any feedback on grammar or fluency is greatly appreciated.**
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What to expect:
-This isn’t a romance, but the search for his lost love is what drives Darius through each era and every challenge.
-Intense battles and strategic confrontations.
-Exploration of a world with complex, evolving eras.
-Progression fantasy with gradual mastery of magic.
-A variety of mystical and fantastical creatures, each with unique abilities and lore.
-No harem, but deep and meaningful character relationships.
-Steady progression as Darius uncovers the mysteries of his power and the world around him.
-First-person POV, offering a direct and immersive experience from the protagonist
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-Chapters will be released every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday at 11:05 am (GMT-3).
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Im not gonna overreact but i really love how he portrays the world and how the storytelling is so smooth i love it as I'm also creating my first novel it was also really helpful..
My friend, no matter what, I will support you. You’ve got this! My friend, no matter what, I will support you. You’ve got this! My friend, no matter what, I will support you. You’ve got this!
I like the concept and the author seems to know how to make his word impactful. looking forward to seeing how the story goes
This book is a stunning nine out of ten. But i would have appreciated a more picturesque explanation of the civilized world he ended up in to help my imagination. Nevertheless it’s still a very good book
I loved it from the first three chapters, the Author is very good at using words that are easy to understand with neat grammar, even though this story uses the first person POV. I also like the concept of time travel that has its own consequences, it makes the MC more cautious and has its own wisdom. Worldbuilding is explained in quite detail, maybe you can add significant differences from one era to another so that readers are not confused, this book has great potential to develop further.
this book is so interesting and captivating. although i haven't gone far in the book, but just based on the little chapters i read, i know this book is amazing. the description is top notch. but this protagonist is quite impulsive and doesn't think rationally before he does something. how could you just barge in on Grimnor like that? anyway good job author
overall I'm enjoying the story and the jumping through different eras is a concept I never thought of until I read this. the first early chapters gave me Re:Zero vibs so that could explain why I like it. overall 10/10
I really like the depth of your story. I also love the path you took with it. It's an interesting world build and anyone would never get bored of reading. Good work!
I thought it was romantic but the author said it wasn't. However I still found it interesting, especially about the protagonist's mentality, after suffering in all those worlds, all that time and eternal life does he still have normal feelings?And a sound mind, I am eager to read the novel and find out.
Interesting story with a surprising and efficient use of the first person narrative. I recommend it to everyone
This novel is very wonderful 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's really a great novel.i loved the story and got hooked to it.Hope it continues regular updates.
i haven't read the entire book yet but the first chapter was too good. the way it was written had me glued on a fixated spot (not gonna lie,it made me feel very emotional and i very much love it). it's a recommended read from me to you.
i like this novel. I got hooked up with just the first two chapters.normally im not the type to make reviews but this book is just good
I just reached the last available chapter and decided to write a short review of this fantastic work. I like the world, story, and concept, and I can't wait for the author to upload the next chapters. I can't recommend this novel enough if you want something fresh and enjoyable. And for the author - Keep up the good work!
So here's what I thought of this book. The story is indeed interesting and unique. Yet the main concept introduced in the synopsis about finding the MC's love at different times shows a bit of a long story in progress. It is barely at the story so far yet. Also, the writing quality is good but it sometimes just goes too narrative or descriptive like it feels to me that it's going over the top to explain some normal event. Also, the POV is in first person which is kinda of a challenge for controlling the sequence of events in the story but it's also enjoyable to read a first person narration. I think the foundation of the story still needs some improvement so keep working and writing, author.
This novel is really nice. I got hooked from the first two chapters, although novels using the first-person pronoun isn't really my style but I guess there can be exceptions. I hope the book doesn't get dropped halfway like others