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Fake Goddess to the True Goddess
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In a normal modern world, a strange force was brewing leaving all the creatures in the universe alerted. Our protagonist, Su Li was chosen as the carrier of hopes for all the things in the world by an ancient oracle. To become strong, she going to go through a series of challenges, tragedies and being stuck in the power struggle between worlds.
To protect the world and the people she cares about she needs to be strong and stronger.
But unknown to everyone, she had a secret even she doesn't know, except for one person.
A journey to protect the universe... or is it?
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good work I'm kinda the same it not like I want to be a girl in this life but if reincarnation is real then I will like to life as a female and still love girls and experience what I couldn't before, and somedays I do dream of me gender bent as a girl because in my opinion I will look cute af
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The obliviousness of the MC with everything that revolves around her is sightly frustrating in my opinion. Everyone aside from her 'knows', and those 'things' are only increasing and forming and unstable snowball that the MC had no idea when it's going to fall in her head. That is the thing that bothers me a little. Maybe I'm just too picky with the 'mysterious' stuff and all but, I think it's just too much, and it didn't get wrapped before had more of those to theorize about. Aside from that, it's kinda enjoyable though...
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Don't get me wrong, everything is quite decent. The reason why I'm rating this so low is mostly because of the grammar; there are so many grammar mistakes, and at certain point sentences are barely readable. Also, some sentences can be put into one paragraph yet it isn't. Which is, in my opinion wasting too much space. "English is not my native language" isn't an excuse either, as if you're not certain or not good at something you shouldn't be afraid to get some help. Get someone to proofread/beta read it, recheck your grammar, etc. You can't really try to justify having a problem when there's a perfectly great solution to it already. As for the other aspects, I can't give it more than a four since there's not exactly anything I haven't seen to the world and it isn't exactly unique, the pacing's fine but still not perfect and the character can sometimes feel a bit two dimensional, and there's not really any realistic problem they face, with the exception of the protagonist of course. But even still, you're not leaving much room for character development. Annnnnnd, the updates aren't exactly that stable, but still decent so I gave that a three.
The story is probably one of the more accurate depictions of the trans experinces that I've seen. I really enjoy that this is treated fairly as a part of the character and not as a gimic. Besides that I just love the pacing on the reveal of information on how the system and world works has been slow but, substantial to keep me interested. Even if I'm currently 20 chapters in, the fact that there hasn't been three chapters explaining dumping everything into my skull has been refreshing.