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Endless Love and Pain
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Ringkasan
A love that will keep you happy, and A pain that will give you an endless tears and will keep your happiness away.
Who will you choose, a person who'll give you everything or a person who is willing to sacrifice everything for you?
tagar
-- Peringkat
Power 
-- Power
stone Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
4Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasan
I lost the words to write. I've never seen so many errors in a single write up until I stumbled upon this novel. The plot has potential, that fact does not waver. However, it is greatly undermined by the multiple errors encountered in almost every sentence. Puro emotions walang rationalism and reason, napag-iiwanan ang temperament ng mga characters.
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may potential yung story. Enhance mo lang english grammar mo at makaka earn ka rin ng maraming readers. I'll wait for your updates. Goodluck.
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