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DXD:SI AS RISER WITH JACKASS TEMPLATE SYSTEM
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Out of nowhere, I find myself as a certain blond devil that has a fiancee that hated me greatly.
"Riser Phenex. Damn, he is the stepping stone for that red dragon to begin the road to him becoming Harem King." Lamenting myself for not becoming any other characters rather than this playboy and jackass, I know I need to figure out something that will make me not get punched by a red gauntlet that has an item that will injure my devilish body.
"Ding! Jackass Template System has been fused with the host." An announcement sounded in my head as I had to hold my gasp from shouting in glee about receiving my golden finger or cheating in a world where a pervert can destroy a portion of a mountain easily.
"The first character has been drawn. Congratulations, you have gotten the template of Quicksilver(X-Men Evolution Version)." My life as a stepping stone gradually disappears as I now feel confident to go against other challenges.
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Is this going to be another rias bashing dxd fic? Cause im pretty tired of those already ................................................
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1. it's my bias opinion - i don't like transmigrate novel when there is already bad opinion about mc or whatever character, ex riser everyone know how is he and his behaviour and suddenly you transmigrate in the middle so that's a big nooo for me 2- mc don't do anything to improve his image , he say sorry or all that but there is no motivation behind 3- if author wants he can reincarnated mc as riser in his baby age like 4 years old so he can have time to improve his skills behaviour etc 4 - whole story of premise is just based on riser marriage and there is nothing more than that 5- i don't like to much mc either i know he is teenager and all that but there is limit so yeah that all hope you get enough understanding of this novel
its a lie he doesn't have a system the author just tricked you guys the template system he doesnt have it its all a lie the author is big fat liar
Iโll rewrite this review when the mc actually gets his system until then i say good day sir!๐ง
so far (I'm in chapter 5) I think the author is doing a good job, precisely with the personality of the Mc who does not force himself to please everyone like this Beta Mc and he is also a little arrogant and narcissistic, and I will add that I currently enjoy as he is interacting with his family . and I add with regard to the grammar and the construction of world , this also it's good job continue like that๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
author doesn't know a thing about Riser, he's a powerful devil that was respected because of his strength he had a Harem, and doesn't need to force servants, he looked pathetic when he lost to Issei but he was one of the lucky young masters in the series
A very disapointing fanfic where the author doesenโt know a shi* about riser phoenix and the template systeam is a trasch tier i mean comon quick silver as a template where close combat beings are not only very rare but faster then quick silver (movie) and the most fights hapens in the skyโฆโฆ.
Practice English or get this translated. ,................................................................................................
This story is the worst excuse of a DxD fanfic I've read. Even if the writing quality wasn't like this, ie. Unreadable , it would still suck. The MC is a retard that has the intellect and common sense of a 7 year old.
proof read your novel before publishing. most of the time it gets confusing when you call a man her when talking to a woman. a bit biased to riser thought I don't know if I just read it wrong but it seems biased for me.
He visto malos pero este se lleva la palma se nota que no entiendes los niveles de poder de dxd raiser e 6 meses de entrenamiento con un dragon alcanzo fisica i magia el poder demonio de clase alta i pudo darle pelea a un demonio de clase suprema
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I like it so far it pretty good and funny ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
How much is liked that for plains picture of the other ones are you doing today I need to get together soon as I zkiznsixsjxjujxnnsisnsoznslznzlznzkzkskskzkzmzmmzkzkzzk
Don't believe those one-star reviews lol, the story is just slow phased, it's only been one day in the story. The system also exists, sigh. it just needs a trigger, which some people didn't wait for before giving a one star. And I don't mind the mc dumping to venelana and grayfia... It's not like you wouldn't do that if you saw them. So, far it's entertaining.
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This story is unreadable. The MC simp over every single female character in the story. Give over the top speech and added a weird system. Riser has already powerful. You did not need to add a system to the story.