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It's a pretty good book, what I don't like here are the long descriptions that break up the story, but it gets better as it goes along. I welcome the fact that this is a "weaktostrong" story and that it doesn't contain a "harem"
if you like weak to strong mc, going to academy, rising against all odds, people thinking that mc is a 'waste'....this is for you......i have encounter so much of this that it became annoying.....im fine with weak to strong but for me it's just boring Good writing quality and world background but i just don't like the character design and story development... imo mc doesn't act like 1 millions years old cultivator
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Great book with great potential! just a small tip, don't make long paragraphs, separate them every 5 lines or so, otherwise it tires the eye and make it difficult to read. looking forward for more chaps!
I noticed you needed a cover for the series so i drew up this for you. I hope you like it. spammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm