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Dream Trip { HIATUS! ]
4.39 (28 peringkat)
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the daily life of a Supreme Being.
English is not my native language.
I like Mc Op .
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DO NOT TAKE THIS STORY SERIOUSLY.
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gotta be honest, I have no clue whats going on and its kind of pointless, in the first 10 chapters I dont think there's an actual paragraph of good writing its just a block of text to do with some stupid abilities that don't need explaing, its not a story its a stat sheet so I don't understand how this 'story' has such a high rating unless they are bots or he deletes bad reviews ill see if this gets deleted anyway because the only people that would rate this highly are people that would think reading stats in wow is a good read.
I like it hipe u just do merlin been waiting for someone to do her and i dont want 80 girls plus merlin fits him also kids would be cool love to see mom merlin
Já que o autor é br, vou escrever em português mesmo. Cara, é bem daora para ler e passar o tempo, mas ia melhorar muito se tu descrevesse mais as cenas.
I've lost all my brain cells... Aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
The chapters are too short and the protagonist is just too overpowered. and I can't really know if a person is talking or not, I also don't know who is talking because of how the dialogues are put together. Maybe try to change how they are formatted and see which one works well. and try using Grammarly when you are writing but preferably on a computer or any other device that is not a phone because if it is a phone then it may not work well(speaking from experience). (you can ignore this because you are already too far) I would recommend trying to start slow but not too slow and make him earn things instead of just getting it, like give him a good starting point. a place like a village for things like experience with corruption or fighting to survive and get by. and progress from there with new ideas while giving the mc or other characters important to the plot some hardships to face together or alone.
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Autor br= 5 estrelas 😟 historia divertida pra passar o tempo .... capitulos curtos mc dahora ...........................................
This is a rather confusing review for me. I honestly quite like both the idea of the story as well as how the story goes. So overall, I quite like the story! But the thing is, I can't enjoy reading this. The way in which the story is written is just so hard to read. As I read it, it just feels like I'm constantly reading a character stat sheet or something. Sometimes I can't even tell if there's an interaction between two characters or not. Overall, great idea and story, but the writing causes it to be so much worse.
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this story is getting me hyped so please don't drop it author 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Do you have any discord server for images????? . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
I like op mc too!!!! And harem if you can add it!! But if you don't want then its ok Bdznzjtxktsmy eww yrsl6 ra j DxD lysjfcmfajyfktraiyfktdotdjtdktsi6fktsu
it was good but I don't like when merlin gets pregnent so I dropped [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Can't stop rereading this when i got bored and read all over again i guess im addicted to this new fanfic, its really enjoyable and this is one of my favorite fanfic so far
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Here the Five star from me to show you how much this got me hooked and now I am waiting for more chapters...., so common give us some morrrrrrrrre chapters.......
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"Você e todo o seu cérebro leram um webnovel .... ... Transmigrando .... ... Transmigrando ... ... Transmigrando .... ... Você se tornou Delirante"
> Harem : I don't know if there will be one yet . > This is my first time writing a story so go easy on me. > English is not my native language, if there are any grammatical mistakes please correct me.