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DragonBall Twin Drive
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Ringkasan
A dragon ball fan died and he was given a chance to reincarnate into the world of dragon ball as the son of Goku and brother of Gohan.
Now he has to find a way to become strong enough to live out his life to the fullest.
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![KellBrower]()
KellBrower Berpartisipasi 10 -
![Finnish_man]()
Finnish_man Berpartisipasi 9 -
![Veber]()
Veber Berpartisipasi 7
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Tulis ulasan
What happened to the MC's tail? Because Gohan(MC's twin) had a tail at the beginning of Dragon ball Z.
El fanfic comieza bien y luego va de mal en peor. El protagonista no tiene carisma y no es agradable. Los eventos pasan muy rapido nace y al capitulo 7 ya esta en la camara del tiempo y envejecido 15 años. Es un fanfic sin rumbo.
Basically the timeline is rip, the MC is cold,calculating and an antihero borderline evil. Hmm, grammar is decent but author I suggest you read some of Holy_Joker's fanfics it could be inspiration for a selfish and goal-driven MC
MC is in a frantic state to get stronger at all times, zero chill. refuses to handle is own family in a normal manner. ages himself like 15 years just to avoid his mothers nagging. its really just a sad MC in my eyes. He only reconciles with his mother when he's able to move away. Other than that the story is decent. One birth caused a butterfly ripple that reached across the universe apparently. probably would take more time to affect such a range but hey its a fanfic. Grammar isn't great but not terrible. hoping it gets better because I havent given up yet.