Dragon King's Son-In-Law

I read 1/3 of the raw which is like 200-300 and sneaked a peek at the ending. It seems to be a harem and the MC is actually very caring and protective to his women. The cultivation lvls are the usual: Qi Condensation, Foundation Establishment, etc. But also have a different kind by dragons with 9 lvls. It also includes ingredients, attributes, pills, majic weapons....There are also layers of sky/heaven like no human cultivator can descend to below 5th layer of heaven, so the remaining cultivators are mostly of dragon tribe and a mysterious organisation that retains peace in the human world. The story is mostly a mixture of modern and xianxia stuff...The MC is Haoren, 19, the son of 2 famous scientists who are always busy, he is raised by his grandmother. His parents sent him to a normal school but the school is managed by the dragon palace (东海龙宫). He is pretty much well like in his dorm with his fellow classmates. There are 5 women: the dragon princess (15 yrs old attending the top secondary school, met when she failed to summon the rain and fell onto him in the first few chapters), the class monitor (forgotten childhood sweetheart), 2 sisters from heaven (trapped in the mortal world for 200 yrs, released after he saw them on his first visit to the dragon palace) and his teacher (one of members of the secret organization, raised by an elder of the dragon palace). He have a pet named Xiao Bai, a baby snow lion that can later fly and spit fire. His cultivation is special, balancing the 5 attributes (fire, water, earth, metal and wood) in his body to cultivate the lightning attribute to shoot sword qi...

I have just completed the raws of this novel. The plot line and story are brilliant. Its worth reading. But I must admit, last 100 chapters of this novel are like a mess. Almost everything happens in these last chapters. You can really feel that the author is rushing to finish this novel as soon as possible. The cultivation level of the MC and his girls skyrocket in these chapters, sometimes even skipping few of the levels directly. There are 3 bed scenes with Su Han, Zi and Yujia respectively. Finally he has 5 women in his harem: Su Han, Zhao Yanzi, Xie Yujia, Lu Linlin and Lu Lili. There is one more, Duan Yao, whose ending is not elaborated as her soul is being protected in the Kunlun Mountain Lamp because she was injured while saving Hao Ren from Xu Ke. It was written in the last chapter that once MC reaches the realm of 8 hearts lotus, he can save her. But it has been 5 years since that incident and he can't say if her soul still has feeling for him. Many characters were not properly developed like: Duan Yao, Zhao Baibai, Lu sisters, Western Queen, Wu Luoxue, Qin Lang, Elder Xingyue, Ye Zilong and many more. Romance between MC and Su Han, Lu sisters and Guan Yao, was also not elaborated. Ending was very abrupt: 5 years later, Hao Ren becomes a world famous architect and inherits Iom Studio. He marries Zi in the East China Sea Dragon Palace and half-a-month later marries Xie Yujia in front of all the mortals. Now another mystery that was unraveled was about Su Han. Her father is a water-system Tianlong and lord of the Dragon Temple. Her mother is the Gold-system Tianlong who successfully robbed 500 years ago. Now about Smart. He is the only son of Shiefie (Phoenix) and Qin Lang (Unicorn). Both of whom are the King of the World. Shiefie is the daughter of the Prisoner. Smart is an Ink-Black Unicorn. He falls in love with Wu Luoxue, who lives a life of mortal but is actually the daughter of Bai Ze, another King of the World. Conclusion was not given to their romance, even in the last chapter. Lu sisters are actually the core disciples of the Western Queen ('The Virgin'), who loves them like daughters and marries them to Hao Ren. Zhao Kuo is the chosen one by heavens. He marries Elder Xingyue in the end. Zhao Hooran is resurrected in the end as the ultimate dragon. Oh, and there is also the Monkey King (Sun Wukong), who becomes the Second brother of Hao Ren. His 'Stick' becomes the life magic weapon of Hao Ren. Although there are short-comings and the ending never feels to be sufficient, this is still a great novel with a lot of scope for a new volume or a good spin-off. Because seriously, the its ending cannot be called a conclusion. The author has 2 other novels, about which I don't have much idea. But it will be welcomed if you can give their summaries and reviews in the comments.

I regret to say that I am dropping this novel, which is a pity because I have such high hope in the beginning chapters. But the characters brain-damage actions (most of them) convince me otherwise. First, the grandmother. Grandmother, stop messing with your grandson's love life. I know you want great grandkids but you can't drag every girls in sight and dump them into his lap. And what the heck is telling each of them you love them and won't let the boy mistreat them? The one to mistreat them the most is YOU! If you love someone, would you try to hook her lover WITH ANOTHER GIRL?! Then The immortal grandma. I know you love your disciple and all. But when your disciple fall for a guy with owner, instead of consulting her to stop it, you go everywhere lobbying the guy to break up with his rightful fiancee and go with your disciple?? Do you think your disciple would be happy you force a guy to stay with her? And if the guy willingly go to your disciple, would you really want such an unfaithful guy to be with her? And what is is rant about how he is mistreating your disciple? They were never an item, how can there be mistreatment? Zi Honestly the one I like best. She is annoying as hell but at least she doesn't do the stupid ****. Class Prez (who are no longer one) You should stop the minute you know he has a fiancee. Why do you still stick to him and be doubtful whether he has something with that girl when he is the one to tell you that is his fiancee? Hao Ren You are not a good guy. Decide already, you moron. Decide who you like and come clean. Wait, there is nothing to decide. You know you have to marry Zi, or she dies. And that is also the deal you struck with her parents who was extremely nice to you! So what are you doing acting like that to the other girl and give her hope? You tell her not to go abroad. You hold her hand. You ask her out. You sit beside her on the bus. You are silent when everyone tease that you guys are an item. And then many chapters after that you say you are not her boyfriend?! If this is not lover's behaviors then what is?!!!!

First off, let me say that the translation quality and updates are quite good. There is some odd grammar here and there but within acceptable margins considering the upload speed. I've read up to the latest chapter as of this review (ch. 151) and the MC has barely progressed in cultivating. There's supposed to be 8 or 9 levels and most likely more, but up to ch. 151, he's barely at half kan-level i.e. the first level. According to the statsguy, this novel only has 798 chapters which means more than 1/5 is complete and the MC has done almost nothing. The author spends more time of emphasizing the social life and random events regarding the MC which doesn't contribute to the overall story in my opinion. Even though he should studying for exams or cultivating to progress himself, why is he doing random things like going to his fiance's middle school for parent/teacher meetings or "protecting" her from other students. She didn't need his protection before, why now? Let's move on to character development, trick statement, there isn't much to begin with. His school friends make the same lame jokes about his good luck with women and trying to get the hot girls' numbers from him. His fiance's constant attitude problem hasn't changed much and his just-revealed childhood friend never liked him until he started getting popular which betrays her own character design. She was portrayed in the beginning as goody-two-shoes girl who didn't care about popularity, wealth, or power, but she ends up doing the exact opposite. Lastly, while I understand China's age of consent is 14, it's still kind of creepy to read about a university student is touching a middle school girl's legs who is 15. Why does the author constantly describe how sexy a middle school student is? It's not just the MC's fiance either, there are several occasions where it mentions some of her friends and other random students. It's just weird to me reading it since I'm American and where my state's age of consent is 18. Take my review for a grain of salt but the story just isn't going anywhere at this rate for me to want to continue reading it. Have a nice day.

It is a very interesting story , but overly long. And the ss are pricy. Also zi has a beyond spoilt character. I really was enjoying the story until demands for ss. I feel with a story that takes so long to get to important details, it should be cheaper so one can enjoy the story