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Dragon Ball : Smart Wish to Omnipotence
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A Fat , Ugly , Pig-like human screamed after rewatching the wishes made in dragon ball multiverse :" What the **** are thos shitty wishes .... all those guys are insanely stupid ..."
then , he murmured under his breath : " If I were in the Dragon Ball multiverse , even if I got into Oolong's body , I'll be ablevto become Omnipotent !!! "
suddenly , as if answering him , a strange white lightning bolt fell from the heavens directly on his head ....
the next moment , he found himself in Oolong's body ....
he thought " F*UCK !!! "
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Please update it, I think the story has potential. So it would be nice if you could work on it since it has potential s s s s s s sdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
Really nice, I believe you would benefit from something like gramerly, if youโre on computer, because there are quite a lot of spelling mistakes, but the mistakes so far arenโt too off so my brain automatically replaces the word with the correct one, but yeah, perhaps an editor, or something? But otherwise, nice๐
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good fanfic in every way, the chapters could only be a little longer, but apart from that it's very good thank you ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Author please donโt drop this one itโs a good read too like your Hades one. Iโm really looking forward to seeing how these two stories develop. Especially with this character as oolong I donโt think Iโve seen anyone else use him as a character to become awesome with.
This is just starting but I can see the potential of it. So if author didn't drop it, it will be a very good fanfic in my opinion. Magic path is underrated in dragon balls but can't blame it on the anime due to mainstream power system is Ki. Still, it will be interesting to see mc major himself in magic while training his Ki as secondary.. Some of wish I would do to augment my magic would be wish for cultivation technique for soul due to it as base of my magic power. Then some kind of convertion technique to convert Ki to magic, and some other that I can't think off... Anyway, nice one.. Keep it up.
Just do the best you can and make sure that your OC as Oolang(soon Majin Buu) could be the most free man of the DragonBall universe. Also the story is good, keep up the good work.
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can you please continue writing this it is a very good fanfic so far I really enjoy reading it so please continue writing more โบ๏ธ keep up the good work