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Dragon Ball: Rise of the Saiyan
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Acala had never put much stock in the afterlife. Reincarnation was the last thing she expected—especially not as a Saiyan baby with an impressive power level of 700. But life, or rather, her second shot at it, had something else in store for her. Eight years passed and she found herself standing at trial in front of the notorious coward, King Vegeta. The planet's situation was nothing short of a soap opera, with Frieza, the notorious 'Planet Seller,' holding the reins and the Saiyans working as his infamous 'Planet Pirates.'
What happened was that Acala's parents chose the worst possible time to start a revolution. Part, or rather leaders of the radical faction, they aimed to overthrow both Frieza and King Vegeta on Prince Vegeta's naming ceremony. Unsurprisingly, it got most of them and most of their comrades and relatives executed. The children were spared from the massacre but banished to the deathworld of Xarrack to survive or perish... mostly to perish of course.
Xarrack was a nightmare, on the first day their numbers plummeted by a quarter. The second day found Acala standing in the middle of an endless plain, the grass swaying gently in the wind, and a rabbit munching on her tail,
"Not again!"
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Please post 1 chapter a day. it's really good. I hope it's 1 chapter a day. Keep up the good work. And have fun writing.
I tend to not get my hopes up, but I’m hoping this fic doesn’t get dropped. I have had problems with the two fics I wrote and can understand such things as writer's block and negative reviews that are just there to make you quit. Pls, don’t listen to any negative comments without constructive criticism.
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I'm really looking forward to more chapters, this fic seems pretty good and I love the idea and hope this fic doesn't stop randomly, so I believe setting goals would be great but I do wonder if your going to enter "dragon ball super" when beerus looks for the super saiyan god or when vegeta looks for more saiyans in the "saiyan saga" although I don't know if vegeta would believe if any saiyan is still alive on the planet or maybe you have your own idea ether way I look forward to what happens, also I recommend super saiyan beast because she has that wild side in her and I do hope you keep her tail ssj 4 would be fun,