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Dragon Ball: New Game Plus
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To ever believe the gods had his best interest in mind was the most idiotic belief Vidar ever had. Summoned to be a Time Patroller, he is cursed and rejected even after spending decades loyally serving them. Therefore, he will make a wish. A wish to be thrust back to the beginning, his sights set on toppling the divine hierarchy.
"A game?" Although muffled by the god's vice-like grip, Vidar lightly chuckled. "It always has been."
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It’s promising it’s about a guy with a system like power the main apeal is the world building but if I had to critique it the writing of action scenes could be better but the power scalling itself is okay Atleast for now
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So far, everything is going great. I like where the story is going and I actually feel immersed while I'm reading it. Also the writing quality is absolutely amazing for your first time writing a story, so keep up the great work 👍.