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Douluo Dalu With the Fortune Sytem
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Klein a full time fireman died while rescuing a family on a fire accident little he knows that after he woke up he will be given his life greatest second chance
English is not my mouther tounge so please be lenient on me also this is my first ever noble, I only read the Manga of Soul Land and not the light novel
I hope you enjoy my story
Thank you for your time reading my Fanfic
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Pretty bad story. English is absolutely sht. You can barely understand what's going on and it is still confusing af. What makes it worse is random sht the mc suddenly knows just cause... Not worth the read. The author needs to seriously clean it up. Maybe use Grammarly to sort out the major issues?
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