/ General / don't run, my sweety
don't run, my sweety
4.11 (151 peringkat)
Ringkasan
she lost her precious first night, when she just reborn.
she is the master of pen and sword
some people say that is she almighty?
who knows what happened to her? If she didn't work hard. she had to give birth to someone else.
when this deal can finally end, why he doesn't allow her to leave, why he let her stay on the bed everyday.
Penggemar
-
![ishimori1]()
ishimori1 Berpartisipasi 3091 -
![Cecilia2323]()
Cecilia2323 Berpartisipasi 2210 -
![Sara_1994]()
Sara_1994 Berpartisipasi 2006
Hadiah
-- Hadiah diterima Status Power Mingguan
-- Peringkat
Power 
-- Power
stone Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
151Ulasan-ulasan
4.11
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasan
All in all great novel but really takes 10 stones for 1 chapter? I may not able to continue it all cahapters cost 10 when other novel only 3 max 5 stones per chapter...please do reconsider thanks
I hate when these wuxia novels try to justify rape, control and abuse of the FL by the ML. It's totally wrong on so many level and what it is saying is that its okay for these things to happen to FL, like she asked for it, its okay to not have a brain or heart or opinion except do whatever the male or anyone tells them to. Its not romance, its a nightmare and though I do not know the author, I wonder if they are of a culture that condones it. Though it was fiction, in reality women are going through this and suffering daily through things like these, the emotional damage is horrific. Its not okay to forgive or let the ML or anyone get away with actions like these even if that person begs for forgiveness or try to make up for it. Women are to be respected, no matter what/who she is and should be encouraged to grow as a person of self worth/confidence with all components separate from anyone else. As such, in spite of the bad grammar, I was struggling through it and just could not like any of the characters. I am completely dropping this novel - GLADLY.
Membuka SPOILER
i can't truly say what i want to say because im not good at english.......but for me the story is interesting๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The story is so far interesting and well thought out but due to the grammar errors the reading flow is disturbed. Those errors also make the conversations a little awkward and I personally stop at every other error to correct it in my mind. I think it would be good chouce to find somebody/ an editor who can correct some of them before the new updates. It is one of the best original stories I have found so far but sadly not one of the best reads.
This novel is just awesome!!! So good itโs even inspired me to write my first review ever! Finished reading all 56 chapters in one go, nonstop! Itโs so addicting. Canโt wait to read more! Even so, there are some grammar mistakes, itโs easy to understand, what author meant to write. Strongly recommend it ๐
Author i love your novel Its amazing.......totally great But the grammar makes it hard to read No offense If you need an editor...you can contact me Cause I really love your book I just hope you accept my help ................ .......................
Love it very much. Hope to see more chapters. Hope finds who she is and get what she wants. Male main character needs to get his feelings in order, before is to late. Want to see female main character give a good lesson to the so call family and women after ml.
Membuka SPOILER
....................................................................................................................................................................................The male lead is a psycho I feel so sorry for the mc she really doesn't deseve this.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Membuka SPOILER
i really enjoy reading this novel ๐๐๐ i love this type of story and the plot,,it is really my cup of teaโโโ my dear author, thank you for sharing with us this beautiful and interesting novel ๐๐๐ ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ
Author I hope that you are fine and I will wait for the updates plz plz plz come back soon ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I really didn't like a his series usually wouldn't write a review hear but need the measly do giving lol. Sorry for not giving good review but not very good.
The story seems interesting but am confused. Can the author explain what auxiliary chapters are? Where do I start reading from? Should I start from chapter 1 or the auxiliary chapters. I am really confused
There was some good love drama. The male lead is somewhat rude and overly possessive, but it's not a hopeless case, I feel that love will change him into a better person. Although, he's not perfect from the start, he is not over the top like some other male leads, at least he's bearable, and his imperfections even make things more spicy (know what "spicy chicken" means, LOL? =) But I mean "spicy" in the good sense - interesting flavor). The female lead is a strong OP character with system cheats. Also there are some nice friends from the male's side and pretty funny interactions with green tea sister villainess.
I really enjoyed reading this one...great plot, characters , female lead is strong and smart... highly recommended, done with lead of ceo and ***** and stupid girl..... this one is refreshing
The story overall has a good plot line and is very thought out. Although there are somegrammatical errors are there, the story still flows pretty well. I like the story and the characters. It's a story I sit and wait for updates because it's good enough to keep my interest! I respect the Author for their talent and ability to write a good story!
Thereโs a very good plot to this story. I very much enjoy female protagonists making an effort to stand up for themselves, and this story does just that. Iโm excited for more!
start was good, you keep looking for updates, but later thr was no development in the character. story makes you to catch ur own tail, novel is not complete since long time author has not updated any chapters
why the **** did he bring her with Himont mission to protect the president ? it's not like she's a part of special force team or something. Firstly, the goal she went to that special force in the first place is to learn how to defend herself not to kill or be a member of that team. Second, he asked her to sign agreement or something to monitor and investigate all his family's members. like hell< I don't understand anything here. > . what's the point of marry her in the first place? if his family has a rule that need to undergo training and pass it in order to become his wife, then why did u **** her until the original body owner died? why? Also, do u expect a university student major in jewel to pass all those kinds of thing in the first place? The way he treat her like a playthings to release his sexual things is quite terrible. He didn't treat her like a human being but playthings. Do u expect such a person to hold the position of captain of a special force??? Such a psycho??? Finally, What the **** did his family do exactly here? His grandmother controls nation economic while his grandfather holds the position of commander and he's the captain of special force and here the mission is to protect the president or what not..... Author tell me what do u want to write exactly here??? It's all mess up. I don't know about other comments cos they only mentioned grammar errors but I would like to mention about plots here. Could you please make good structure and set a specific goal or direction for your novel. You can not let MC run around and do things all over the places without direction or goal.
I donโt think I can read this anymore- I have OCD with the English language and grammar... IM FROM ENGLAND GADDAMNIT, I really canโt help it. Especially as someone who majors in English. But the story was at least somewhat interesting. Somewhat.