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Dimensional Store System In Apocalypse
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Terrorized by the Seed Crystal Virus outbreak, the dimension where Stein was created had its civilization destroyed. Once a world developed with technology as its core, now it was just a wilderness with remnants of tech that's inedible.
Unknown if it was a call of good or bad luck, Zhang Qin Feng was chosen as the one to bring life back to this lawless, desolated place.
What can he do?
How can it be done?
For what purposes?
Is it worth risking his life for?
There's no one to answer Zhang Qin Feng, as he was the only one with such a privilege. But he knew... That everything came with a price.
"STEIN, Inventory!" Zhang Qin Feng grabbed the Phalanx X-02 that took four inventory spaces from his Dimensional Storage. Holding the pistol with both of his hands, he fired a shot accurately at one of the incoming zombie's head.
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Very decent novel.[img=recommend] Background - good ) Fluid storytelling - excellent ) human interaction - good ) explanation source of the system and future progress ) Not many cliches ) good grammar and minimum error ) ะverall score 4.5 \ 5. But if you take into account the general trend of this site, you can safely give even 5 \ 5. Webnovel publishes fewer and fewer truly worthy stories. Recently, only copy-paste garbage.
Writing Quality: It's too good to be true. The grammars are good too. It had a very detailed information at the same time it won't make you feel bored at all. Story Development: The main story line development have a good pace (not too slow and not too fast). Well except for the Romantic relationship of the MC, its too fast I guess. But overall the story development is good. Character Design: I say the characters are too normal but its not that bad considering the story is still young. I'm looking forward to the Character development especially the MC Updating Stability: Its alright and its understandable considering the situation of the author. World Background: This has a lot of potential. Overall: The story is great and I'll support it. ps. sorry I'm not that good in writing a review.
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Interesting apocalypse novel. Don't let1 star comment turn you away. I don't think he/she gave a fair assessment for this author. Good luck, author! Hope you win the competition! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like this novel, with slow Pace and the MC is not to oveepowered at the beginning, and he must scrap materials from zombies he kill to unlock the fitures of STEIN, hope the author can write this novel to the end :) happy reading ;)
Honest review I'm at chap 96 The Mc is dumb that doesn't think of the long term consequences of his actions Especially when he did the raid at the terrorist. He just putting himself in the spot light where any secret organizations or government see him. I'm pretty sure that those guys will come snooping in and boom he's either captured for "examination" or manipulated or dead Seriously just showing off his weapons put him on every organizations, government, etc. watchlist. And being in their watchlist is already fatal for him in either long or short term period.
umm... its really good. What I liked about the novel most is that it has a good amount of detailing in it, the detailing of characters, their surroundings, and what they are doing is really good. So far, it's a good novel and let's see what else is in the store. And yeah, the story is good, though it feels a little slow-paced, but hey its just starting, so can't complain.
If you are in a Gunfight what will you use a gun or fist? @#$% System already told MC that his opponent is stronger but the stupid MC still use fist. R.I.P. common sense
Well i like the way the author write this novel, from the MC focus is to get money (he is poor in the beginning) with normal way (trading money, with STEIN is help of course), and the way he get to learn new things on the post-apocalypse world to his scavengering to get valuable metal, weapons, machines, to 'common' knowledge in the Apocalypse. So yeah i like this novel hope to see this novel to the end! Hope for the best for you Author!!! Have a nice day, stay save and healthy see you later๐๐๐
Very enjoyable, some minor delays in updating but good read. i vote for The book every other day and gIft every 45 chapters. Reasonable original content and enjoyable character interactions.
love story so far. well written thought out line for where the system and mc are going. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
this novel is actually very good is start slow and steady i hope it will be continued and not get stop. please give more chapters on it thank you
tbh apocalypse isn't my thing, too scary to think what we could face. If I didn't know yang I wouldn't have read it, and I do not regret reading it! One of his best work! Good luck yang!
I like how the story flows. There are not many cliches even though this is a system Apocalypse novel. If you combine these 2 genres then you will probably see many same types of outcomes but different types of titles. Very satisfied as of now.
This novel its actually very good! The author put a lot of work in every detail the story is progressing very well and its very fun to read, although it as few chapters now with the release rating that it was soon it will chamge. All in all, read it its very fun, very well written and the plot is cleary was thought about!
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Story for the first eleven chapters was pretty good. Minor grammatical errors aside, it was pretty solid. Story immediately fell off after chapter 12. Main character is revealed to be a busybody that will endanger his own life for someone he has never met before. Main character can literally practice martial arts and cultivate, but instead he gets into random street fights with gangsters while simping over some random girl. Before that fight happened, he paid for multiple meals of a girl from his class, costing a lot of his money. I find it astounding considering she probably makes more than he does. Also, I'm getting sick and tired of the love at first sight cliche, it's such a lazy way of having romance. World background is decent, nothing terrible, but nothing good either. I can't remember if they introduced the country or not. Overall, it was going good, but it's readily apparently the main character is not going to have any intelligence throughout the novel, and is going to kill himself trying to get a harem as fast as possible.
The book is pretty solid as of chap 400 the only issue I have is the author getting mixed up with past and present tense. Itโs especially bad at the beginning where majority of the tenses are wrong. But apart from that, the plot and world building is quite enjoyable.
This novel its actually very good! The author put a lot of work in every detail the story is progressing very well and its very fun to read, although it as few chapters now with the release rating that it was soon it will chamge. All in all, read it its very fun, very well written and the plot is cleary was thought about!