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Hello guys! I am trying to make my second novel I hope you will enjoy it.

In the Blue Star Planet, a live variant monster with different power on it. That we called Digimon. This is a story about a young man who will become the strongest Digimon Trainer in the world.

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DaoistpIwg0B

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Sirione

I stopped at chapter 25 so far it's ok... a little repetitive in the training parts but forgiven. Will it have the advantages of digimon types? for example: Vaccine > Virus Virus > Data Data > Vaccine. I don't know how you intend to develop this story from what I see it looks like a mixture of pokemon, digimon and xianxia, ​​personally I find it quite difficult to develop a good plot in the way you set up the world needs a lot of imagination ahahahaha. By the way, do you intend to make the mc fight? If yes, I saw using the spirits of ancient digimons for the mc to transform? same as frontier digimon. Sorry if you didn't understand. I used Google Translator.

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manuel_rojas

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Traczz

Writing quality: Good writing, but I miss a little bit about the chapters being a bit small, and for an old reader I miss that feeling of finishing a chapter and getting really excited to read more, because it ends quickly, 4.5 stars.----------------------------------------------------------------Update stability: Chapters have a good update. 5 stars.----------------- Development of the story: Well the story, it has a good routing, I just hope it doesn't evolve the digimons quickly, otherwise it would be too early. 5 stars.----------------------------------------------------------- Character Design: Good character, but he has a good system. 5 stars. Background of the world: This part I would like to write more, Digimon stories are rare to find, and with a good character line even more, I'm glad you started this idea! You can see the affection and how you love the Digimon anime, and you can pass this energy on to the readers, for example: at the beginning of the digimon in eggs, I was looking on google for digimons and evolutions, to remember nostalgia. Congratulations for your work! Have a good day!

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Jonathan_Pardo_4936

Mega super duper legal mesmo continua a sim 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 👍 ✌ 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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ShenLung

it is a good fanfic and I always wanted a digimon fic the only problem I have is that the chapter it's a bit short [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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NbRust

Is this a translated fanfic or an original story ?

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Tiktark
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i like the fanfic, i hope you keep it going! .................................................................................................

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Charmys_Chef

I really like this Digimon story, a few things that could improve though are the length of the chapters, story development as well. What I mean by that is what is his main purpose and how he's going to achieve that, the development of his Digimon and what he's wanting them to eventually evolve into and why, as well as how big the world he's in is. Like, is there different countries, continents, leaders, etc. Also, is this dropped now?

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enod_sharutobe

Muito bom, amo o digimon e acho que é muito legal alguém fazer tal fanfiction divertida e criativa, espero que continue o grande trabalho e crie um ótimo final á história.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Zaelum

It's pretty good!!!!~ It's has been awhile since I read a good digimon fanfic. The combination of Pokemon and Digimon made a good story. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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