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Diavazo Logs: Motivating a Bookworm Protagonist
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Yo. Name's Nori. I'm just an ordinary twenty-year-old university student—really—that woke up transported to this world called Gaellia one day. On my first day, I find myself thrown in jail and met my partner that will travel with me: an AI that I have a telepathic bond with.
[Nori, there are monsters attacking the city.]
Not my problem.
"Big Sis! I bought this dress for you!"
"Bro! Let's head to the gate to see who would get a higher kill count!"
[Nori, if you do this mission, you can read 50,000 words of a new title—]
Ah! Alright already, I get it!
**On hiatus for volume compilation**
***Volume Two being roughed out***
{Note: Written in 1st Person POV. Nori is nonbinary. Romance-free for Nori but lots of misunderstandings happen.}
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Hello! Author of Diavazo Logs here. So I thought I'd give a more detailed overview of DiaL while avoiding spoilers. DiaL follows the two main characters, Nori and their AI partner, as they travel through Gaellia—a world that would soon become the battleground for a game where Winning meant Everything (and there is only one winner). Of course, Nori wants nothing to do with it even though they're a player. Diavazo Logs is a story of an AI pushing his reluctant partner to be a "hero," helped along by the fact Nori's "Luck" really is to be admired. TL;DR: DiaL is about a "not my business" protagonist that gets dragged into trouble and problems due to their righteous AI partner. I'm very glad the Inkstone publishing platform is finally rolled out since I've been waiting for months to share my titles here. I'm one of the very first authors trying out the platform so there are bugs but it's to be expected! (Root Ball Prison Cell is C15 and She Brought Me Cake is C16 instead of C2 or C3, respectively. Hopefully, that will be fixed soon though.) Oh, yeah, updates. Release rate will be 10/week—double on Friday, Saturday, and Sunday. I'll try to maintain a constant buffer as long as there is interest.
Definitely an original to read! Story got potential, there is a system! Fun & puns, what else do we need? Good grammar, yeah we need good grammar! We got good grammar, the selling point of this novel is the grammar 👌🏻.
I love it. 5/5, hope this will help you keep writing. Now I just need to write 140 characters. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato.
For me, the first 37 chapters are quite good and entertaining. Except that, I hope there is more of other characters and their interactions with MC. Right now, we all met few of the characters but it feels like there is no effect or anything to the MC (except for their AI, no.37). But it is promising and I really would love to read more.
The story is quite good with a fast paced development (im 30 chapters in). The first few chapters could have been put into one because they were unnecessarily and last but not least - 30 chapters in and i can't tell if Nori is a boy or girl - what the hell does nonbinary even mean!!!!
Not a bad read sadly the author suffers from a bad case of mystery hook syndrome. This has a making of a great novel but due to the author's lack of experience and the incessant desire to be mysterious with the mc's gender it just killed the whole novel. See you need identity to make your mark, but due to the desire of the author the mc is coming out as some confused bisexual individual. And you can see this on the sly sexual comments the author adds to add to the confusion. Fun read but utterly frustrating on some part. Can be a good read when you run out of other books to read. To the author i suggest you pick up David Eddings work. Read Belgariad Series, Mallorean Series, Belgarath the Sorcerer, Polgara the Sorcerers then finally the Rivan Codex. Youll thank me later.
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Fishy and fishy writing. Good story with fish from almost every sea ----by hapey fishfishfishfishfishfishfishfishfishfishfishfishfishfishfish
So far this novel good points are: 1- a Mc with a sassy personality 2- a Mc with a sister complex even so the sister is not in the novel, she had mentioned the sister so much that I wonder if she got trap in the alternative world by her sister 3- another novel with an AI system so those are fun Bad points of this novel 1- the world the MC travelled is soooo boring, I feel sleep reading because of it, I hope in new chapters something really interesting will happens 2- the Mc thought are really redundant so after saying all this I added it to my library 😁 I have the feeling I will be pleasantly surprise ... I will give it a try
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Yo. Nori. Please teleport back to "A Sorcerer's Journey". Or drop. Or drop. Or drop. People waited for translator for a long time and they are very angry. New translator with 3 dropped chapters will suffer bad reviews :)
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👍 Good book , I have read up to the newest chapter which was chapter 60 at the time of me posting this review . I have been left satisfied by the ending of volume 1 and still eager for volume 2 , It has been a good experience reading this book so that’s about it for my review .
Overall I am liking this series. It seems to be similar to Warlock of the Magus World but seems to be no where near as dark, more like a parody as far as I can tell so far. Looking forward to more.