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Devouring King /Queen
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I am a newbie author and would like to see my imagination in a book.. SORRY If Synopsis is not good
The Mc will travel to Different worlds and I will create my own World to end it in
Please comment so I can improve my style
My MC WILL BE OP BUT HE/SHE WILL WORK HARD FOR IT
WARNING**: THE MC WILL CHANGE GENDER SO THERE WILL BE A LOT OF MATURE CONTENT LIKE NORMAL S*X AND YURI, THERE MIGHT BE BL IF READERS WANT IT
THERE WILL ALSO BE JAPANESE THINGS LIKE (SAN,KUN,SAMA,ETC.)
THANK YOU VERY MUCH
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It's pretty bad and there's no trouble understanding why it was dropped. Even If you really like a self indulgent Mary Sue, this is still bad. do yourself a favor and avoid
????? This novel is unreadable. The first 5 chapters set you up for a standard weak to strong system novel. But in the next two chapters, there's a massive time skip with no forewarning whatsoever. I mean, there's absolutely no flow in the story so far. Shit just happens because the author says so. Oh, the protagonist has a good relationship with Nico, does he? Well, I wouldn't fucking know because you didn't even write a single word about her or their meeting. I just know because you listed it in the status. He can change into many forms? Wowowow it sure is nice to know that, but it'd be even nicer if I could read why he can do it. The grammar is also god-awful and punctuation is all over the place. There's also no action scenes so far, it just skips over them and goes straight to the protagonist eating his enemies like some sort of cannibal. This is all coming from someone who lived a normal life on Earth. He was smart, sure, but that doesn't mean he can change his views and morals at the drop of a hat. Like really? You're just going to make your protagonist go from being a normal kid on earth into a supreme cannibalistic killing machine without any actual character development? Yeah, this is a bit too much, even with my already depreciating standards.
This novel is just great the build for the system of souls is informative and can still be altered later due to leaving some gaps. Plz continue this story
I will shamelessly as the author give myself a great review but I have to say that as long as I can get a good no. Of views and followers the chapter will get updated more frequently
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
This is the author I currently lost my account so I will repost it. Plz support me....................