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Desire of Impeccable Love
Penulis: ace_hs
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I can't give this book 5 stars because it's not complete yet. Your chapter 1 I guess it was to grab readers attention but it didn't. It just sounded weird kinda .Overall I like the story you're trying to create. Try to make your content more... You know.... Better... With better grammar. Keep up the good work