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Delete | A Fox walking the path of the Slayer of the gods / DXD
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A person who follows the path of a magician in a world without magic. A man who solves one riddle of the universe after another without even realizing it. And the person who wanted to find out the most distant depths of magic - this is all we can say about our main character, Laura Grande, a man who was considered dangerous even by some of the gods of the multiverse. They decide to kill him.ย
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1- The people are too trusting...just believing MC like that? u got work on this author,,,the people just accepted what MC said just like that, no suspicion and believed all the **** MC said 2- A slave MC is a slave MC. subordinate or not, once u make an oath to serve someone, u become a slave. That sucks. 3-The chps...a lot of ur chp space is taken by ur personal comments and blank spaces. Write ur personal comment at the end or something Anyway GL
The English is so bad this story is unreadable.๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฃ
It's my worsk 5* :3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333*)))))