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I'm giving 5 stars cause you linked the RAWs, too many translators trying their best to hide it and sell locked chapters. Anyways good job.
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The plot itself is good, rasing the future herpes of the universes, however the grammar is kind of difficult to understand. Most of the sentences make it difficult to understand what is really going on.
Literally just every person possible trying to get MC into a relation. I mean every person too like some old lady to his 3 year old son. Honestly what else can you expect from a Chinese author..
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say
Greatly surprised by this story. The translation is quite good even though there’s some mistakes here and there. Recommend to read it, good story to pass time
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good read, waiting for more. good read, waiting for more. good read, waiting for more.
Translation quality. four star. You know some grammar error or missing. It readable and not overly mixed language with alien. Updating. Not so sure. The rest good and grear.
Realmente uma excelente obra, recomendo a todos lerem🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤
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it's great! though there were some confusing parts at first........................... .... .. . . .......... . .... ... . ........
decent story it had a realistic idea of how America was and the writing quality wasn't terrible compared to some other translated works. throughly enjoying this and awaiting for more chapters
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I thank you man for translating this work. it's really good. The characters are done well and I like the interactions between all of them like I could feel them alive. But there are some tiny bit of errors in some cases... but other than that the novel was really easy to read.... i thought I would have to use my dao of MTL like some other so called fanfic translations
Although it is now deleted, I really enjoyed this story, after so many Mc Edgys fanfics and plots full of death and destruction, I found this little gem with a very warm story full of love. I hope that one day the story will be resumed, because it made me very happy.
I absolutely love stories like this and it's really well done and well this is a translation and sometimes not the best grammar it's still a good job and conveys all the ideas
Definitely quite an interesting and intriguing book interesting plot and abilities of the MC not to mention taking care and raising some of the most powerful people/mutants raising them right alongside having a good relationship with Nick Fury and being one of few he actually trusts not to mention being the king of assassins overall have enjoyed reading this book only thing that needs more work on is the grammar other than that it's been good book to read and do look forward to reading more and getting the chance to find out what will happen next can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
First of all, I want to sincerely thank the translator for the quality work. The translation is not lame, of course there are minor flaws, but they do not greatly spoil the reading of this fanfic. I love such original works with excellent and interesting ideas, otherwise it’s already enough that everyone repeats one after another. This is one of the best fanfic themes, so I'll thank the translator again and ask you not to abandon this masterpiece👍👍👍😍😍