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Brendan Hunter, a teen who has a bad life founded himself in the world of DC with 4 quirks and 2 Force that accompanied him.
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I tried... I really did. Very poor grammar. Character personalities are all wrong. MC is stupidly OP with his powers, but is just stupid. This is like some weird version of Arrowverse. As a fan of most DC media, this was a waste of my time.
At the start, it was going pretty well, but author decided to give him a doppelgänger who literally has all his powers but more. Makes no sense because the dude is reincarnated. His doppelgänger is also better than him in every way. Older, defeated Justice League by himself, he even has more powers than the MC. His fire is also stronger than the MCs. Author is writing this out of his asS. One moment he’s best friends with Thea, the next she hates him after she found out he’s overhaul. Then he goes to team flash to act all nice n crap , next chapter they betray him. Author also likes to make Mc op during fights at one time, then a complete moron. Has all these powers but he sometimes losers or easily gets his ass kiCked to people who are weaker than him Anyways, the doppelgänger crap ruined everything. Everyone said it but author does not care about readers opinions at all because he hasn’t responded to absolutely nothing
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1- The characters change their personality from one chapter to another; 2- The story does not make sense and is totally random; 3- The protagonist has no idea how to use his power, sometimes he wins a super strong guy but loses to a weak one; 4- This Doppelganger arc is irritating and meaningless.
grammar is horrible. mc is edgelord and exteremly arrogant (trash wuxia novel young master/mc type) nothing makes any fucking sense. despite the grammar i forced myself to read and after 4 chapters my eyes were bleeding from the cringe
You can't understand a single sentence. The grammar sucks and the back story of the main character is so basic. I don't know if it gets better, I only read the first few chapters before I could not handle it anymore.
how people will react to OverHaul being too young he seems to give zero fu'ck about others leaving him so he can train and get stronger , also i still suggest his Quirks go through Re-Awakening . like Tomura did in BNHA manga against Re-Destro ........ so please Re-Awaken his Quirks so they can be powerfull enough i can't wait for the Chicken Aliens to invade Earth and he go and beat the sh'it out of them and i wish he have some connections with some people like Question , Dr.Fate , and other characters with personality like them this type of characters are consider to be usefull for info and also about knowledge All_Hail_OverHaul_The_One_And_Only
well here you go motivation you want ........... then motivation you get continue i like this especially his powers i can't wait to see how strong he will be when he grow more he is no 12 if he is 16-17 when young 6justice start he will be way too strong with his hand to hand mastery improve a lot more , his powers develop and become stronger , since the more you grow the stronger the quirks become also Overhaul is disassemble and assemble anything he touch also i suggest his quirks go through a growth like in example how devil fruits awaken and his Still and Strength Forces too is limitless in growth with his Still Force he can stop aging in his prime age of early of 20s also make his quirks stronger in the future like fire become at least as hot as sun and ice at least absolute zero overhaul far surpass kai chisaki and rewind can even return one to be nothing when they are still didn't exist
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Horrible story would not recomend if you look past how horrible the grammer and sentence structure is you will find how horrible of an mc he is.
The story is so good and the character development is great, Not only that but the story arc is, HM, delicious. I need more chapters I'm not satisfied with just 1 chapter a day.
please dont waste your time if you wanna look its okay but just till he reincarnates after that its just his hero complex and fan boying after the batman and arrow etc despite claiming to be neutral he himself goes to batman and introduces himself
Love it don't listen to the haters keep the work up........................................................................................,
Heroes are such hypocrites. Argus used Oliver in the past to kill people, and Oliver took lots of lives on his quest before choosing not to anymore. Yet Argus and Oliver are going to arrest the MC because he's taking a few lives (less than what Oliver's taken. And Barry who knows this is still working with Oliver there. Yet he wants to arrest the MC for doing what Olivers' been doing. Hypocrites the lot of them.
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A very generic story with protagonist having a very predictable back story. Sentence structure is atrocious. It is unreadable. Paragraphs of gibberish that can be summed up in one sentence. I do not recommend.