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DC: I'm The Ultimate Lifeform
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What does it mean to be free? Are we ever truly free if everything that will happen has been seen at the end of the day? What does it mean, when at the end of the day, we are all nothing more than characters in a story, brought to life by an all-powerful being?
A/N. Although there is no harem tag, mc would be a man slut. MC would have kids, but would get lost getting them milk, and would only find his way home 18 years later.
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This Broly i really like about it, he has the mentality of DBZ Broly & Power of DBS Broly
Tras la lectura de los primeros catorce capítulos, puedo afirmar que la historia peca de ser excesivamente genérica. Si bien los elementos comunes no son necesariamente negativos y, en muchos casos, pueden funcionar bien, en esta obra no lograrán alcanzar el impacto deseado. La construcción del protagonista y de los personajes secundarios carece de profundidad y se siente predecible, lo cual limita la originalidad del relato. Dado que se trata de un fanfic, es comprensible que pueda experimentar cambios y ajustes en el proceso; Sin embargo, recomendaría al autor invertir un mayor esfuerzo en el desarrollo de los personajes y la trama. Quizás una exploración más detallada de obras originales, como ciertos cómics o adaptaciones cinematográficas, podría proporcionar inspiración para enriquecer las personalidades y motivaciones de los personajes. A pesar de estas limitaciones, cabe destacar algunos aspectos positivos. Los diálogos y las interacciones, aunque no son sobresalientes, resultan bastante superiores en comparación con el promedio que suelen encontrarse en este sitio (aproximadamente un 75% de otras historias). Además, los capítulos tienen una extensión generosa, lo cual permite al lector sumergirse en la narrativa y disfrutar de una experiencia más prolongada. En resumen, esta historia posee potencial, pero requiere un mayor esfuerzo creativo para superar la barrera de lo genérico y ofrecer una experiencia más envolvente y memorable.
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All the characters are very one dimensional except the Mc who has slightly more character and the Mc is arrogant and extremely edgy. I don't know how to describe it other than that but it was a real struggle to read all of the chapters up to the current one. I feel like this was something I would have enjoyed when I was a a young teenager, but now the Mc just seems like an emotionally unstable person that doesn't understand himself and is just basing all his actions on 'would a free person to this' for literally every decision more important than going to the bathroom. It's to the point where the freedom he seeks has become the chains that bind him down. It's frustrating to read about someone so confused about who they are and what they want while also having the mentality of a young teenager.
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this has alot going for it. the problem as with ALOT of OP characters. Is that relationships make a character interesting when they have op powers. because almost every battle is a win they have to have a slice of life like story. so love funny time interesting goals. Freedom has been tried as a goal and it has never worked. in my opinion freedom is not the escape from responsibility or emotions. it the power to never have to worry about what other people do or think unless you want to or respect and or love them.
betting 30 chapters and then drop like the rest, then rinse and repeat with whatever bs story is next.
if I could give a lower rating i would the concept and linking of powers is great fantastic even but the actual story is trash
Giving it a five, could use some improvements in the writing, but still miles better than most fanfics on here, hope you keep going……………………….. (need the review to be 14 characters)zzhdhdbsudbbdbdbdbdbhdhdbdbbdbfbhdhr
Yet another story botched not even surprised at this point LMAO....................................................................................................................
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Giving it a five, could use some improvements in the writing, but still miles better than most fanfics on here, hope you keep going……………………….. (need the review to be 14 characters)zzhdhdbsudbbdbdbdbdbhdhdbdbbdbfbhdhr
the plot of the story is just too messy . The author should really focus and thoroughly go through one event before jumping into another event or adding other major points of interest.
A lobotomy is recommended before reading to ensure you keep your sanity afterwards
Gave me a headache trying to read. The story was just an incoherent mess with a large dose of cringe scattered throughout.