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None of the characters belong to me as well as the image is not mine only the mc is my character without more just enjoy.
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it's a bad quality amnesia isekai that for some reason the author write in English when they have a poor grasp of the English language. The entire conversation between the entity and the m.c's soul is contrived and makes little sense. From beginning to end the soul is given things ,yet all he has to offer is to let the being watch his life in this other universe, that the being can somehow reincarnate him into ,yet this same being can't sate his boredom without doing so? As I said the entire premise makes little sense,and add onto of that the contrived amnesia plot and frankly it's annoying.
You would have put #villain in genre. I don't like watching MC villains, they seem boring and generic to me. I just want to hit him so that he gets rid of his idiotic nature. And I would also have asked to become a Saiyaji or a Namekian with knowledge of ki.
can you have mc wish for super sayin to replace his weakness of physical fights so he doesn't rely on his reality manipulation since it can be easily canceled by higher beings and taken away
everything is nice just that the updates are quite slow but you can take your time author.Nice play just wondering what he will wish for..........