DBZ Goten : Become Stronger By Defeating Your Opponent

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ZATOME10

normal, but Goten becomes strong too quickly, it was possible to make it so that when the tournament of power arch was approaching, so that then he would become stronger than the god of destruction and not before

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Jer_Miller

good stuff. I'm not sure about the other comments, but this is a good translation.

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Cozmic_Dragon

Yea this story fucking sucks, the MC of the entire story hasn't done anything(in 98 chapters the past 12 chapters has been nothing related to the mc). This is just following the canon, and if i wanted to read about that i would read the manga (a actually good story). Honestly this story had potential, but the author refuses to try and write his or her own story. It has just been a shitty ripoff of the actual story. I will say that the updates have been stable (but this is the only good thing about this story).

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Lizrock

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