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Dark Winged Angel
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I can feel my mark burn on my wrists and the back of my neck. The marks show what I am destined for. I am a guardian angel, not the white feathered and golden eyed ones everyone thinks of.
But in a world of angels and supernatural, they still fear what they don't understand,when something isn’t one way or another, when something is different.
I am the best weapon they have, but fear keeps them from seeing this. Me, I don't give a f--k, I have grown up with been looked at differently. They call me the dark angel
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This review was written with such horrid formatting to explain by example. Let me say this; the reason for the single star in Writing Quality is because EVERY line and a half paragraph spacing is used for no evident reason. I tried reading it as an obscure poetic form, but it did not help with how choppy the writing felt. It felt as though my brain were being battered, not a present experience I can assure you. Computers may not have the same formatting problems as phones, but as a lot of readers use hand-held devices it may be prudent to check how your writing appears on small screens. Ignoring the spacing issues, the actual writing was quite good, with few tense or punctuation errors. 4-5 stars. Fleeing before I read all current chapters, I cannot say if the rating given was accurate, but what I perused was pretty good. Ps. Hey Author! Your review is no longer alone! 😋
Here's me shamelessly giving myself a review after waiting for one endlessly😪. Anyway this is my first ever published story .. I'm a avid reader which is why I decided to write one myself ... Check my novel out and give me your sincerest reviews😶 That's the only way I'd correct mistakes after all