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Danny phantom season 4
Penulis: Kanisha_Kimi3
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It’s a continuation after phantom planet and how things go after that
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- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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I’ve really enjoyed this so far. Thanks for posting it. As for criticism, maybe take a second to let things sink in before moving to the next scene. Like when Dan first escapes you could have had him laughing maniacally or something. Just my opinion.