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Penulis: Xanok_Malakai

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A soul is lost wandering the afterlife when it stumbles upon the edge of existance and witnesses the river of reincarnation. Sadly, an unknown hostile entity gives it the boot, sending it for a rollercoaster ride in the river as it is torn apart. An goddess arrives to save the soul in time and stitches it back together again, telling the soul to quickly acquire a falna by any costs. Observe how the soul survives in Orario without conventional magic but with a series of strange skills it obtained from the merger of souls.

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you can also check out my other complete fanfics: Soul Land: Divine Blood.

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Gishi_4187

the author is good at writing but the story and character design kinda seem to be lacking... like a flat can of soda due to a few things like the MC being a background character with no idea about the world he's in making him seem like a drooling moron with no personality. the author tries to make the MC seem like an interesting character by giving him a devouring skill but that falls flat as well because the MC can't truly take advantage of his skill due to his lack of memories.... linda like giving a monkey a sward expecting him to be able to use it properly lol. the only saving grace is the merging souls give him memories of how to use his new skills. As for adding fate characters, I don't mind them so much it just seems like they don't blend well with the type of world and kinda seem to replace the main cast as a consolation prize so Bell can keep his herem.

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Sabaroth_zarkiel

Harem recommendation :Danmachi :Artemis, Athena, Freya, hephaestus, ryuu lion, mikoto yamato hestia, female bell, haruhime, ais, alfia, riveriaFate :artoria (ruler) Morgana Medusa, Jeanne de arc, mordred, scathact, rin tohsaka, minamoto, brynhilder, mashu, Jeanne alter artoria (saber)

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Madara6116

It’s good but the mc changes way to fast and his character is weird to the point I can’t understand if he is a battle maniac or a pervert or a shy boy or a guy with anger issues or a romantic guy and another thing is that after every single fight he is heavily injured and has to rest for at least 3 days to 2-3 weeks it’s kinda annoying that every fight is just a series of fight gets heavily injured gets new soul fragment/s to get more power kills enemies falls unconscious that is the extent of the action in this fic and his relationships with women is weird and kinda forced like freya and syr were in the bag just from a couple of words and then the next second the are having sèx it is weird

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Alex3DxD

The idea is not bad but it needs a lot of polishing and the synopsis needs to be corrected, first of all this is a crossover with destiny, the protagonist has his own fana. The main problems with this story is the protagonist, his story and personality just don't hook you, he is flat and stupid as well as having personality problems.

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The_Dark_Hydrax

After I read the title my first thought was

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Xanok_Malakai

I can't say I'm the best author ever but my previous works did seem pretty popular. on a side note, I am not a complete expert in the Fate series but I will try to do my research to get the characters accurate while also keeping the world of danmachi correct

11mth
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Vitor_Lindo

Lixo até um lixo e melhor do que essa história pode ter certeza sem erros etc mas e um lixo me dá agonia muita agonia só ler o primeiro capítulo chorei por conseguir ler a até o 10 cap mas continua lixo desculpa autor se fosse só do anime seria tô ele com as memórias etc mas e lixo

7mth
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Flaming_star

Really a good start. I first I didn't thought it was unique but it really was.

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jackson_smith

Xanok_Malakai Great Fanfic Keep doing a great job You can do this Danmachi fanfic idea directly after Danmachi: the Great Devourer In Danmachi as a Saiyan A soul is reborn into Danmachi as a Saiyan a month before the start of episode one. Now in this new world, he will take everything for himself, including all beautiful women.

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Lord_Aizen_Lvl9999

one of the best danmachi fanfic i read so KEEP IT UP AUTHOR

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Abeeba

so far so good. I'm not the biggest fan of the Fate crossover as people tend to focus too much on the crossover elements than the OG world but so far the Author is handling it well and is not hyper-focusing on the crossover stuff. Keep up the great work

11mth
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ilove_3260

Hey author who is in the harem?

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Rahul_Tantarpale

why don't you give him rudius grayrat knowledge of magic OR you can also give him Naruto chakra

6mth
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ReaderEnthuist

found it pretty good over all, hope it don't get drop

8mth
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Xu_Huang_

buena historia bro

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