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Danmachi: The Cursed Spear
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"I don't know how to say this, but you are so bland, you make cardboard taste heavenly."
I flinched, lowering my head. I thought I was average.
"Use one of your wishes to be someone at least slightly attractive, or I will use one of them to do so anyway."
I crouched, which felt weird since I had no body, and hugged my legs in despair.
"Seriously, you're so bland you make bland one-liners hilarious."
Aw, come on.
"You're so boring, you make the gods watch paint dry for entertainment."
Motherfucker.
"You're so dumb-"
I was an A+ student!
"You went to a library to find Facebook!"
Okay, that was just mean.
"You so dumb five gods had to dig to find your IQ!"
I didn't even want to be reincarnated anymore.
A god was using yo mama jokes to insult me directly.
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I don't own Danmachi, just so you know.
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Honest Personal Review (HPR) Wow, Just WOW! I am an aspiring Author myself or hope to be one someday and I just gotta say something about this Diamond in a rough. The Prologue Hook is mysteriously placed that it will force you to look forward to the story. The Interaction between the Characters seem profound that they feel real and more pronounced not just names and roles in paper for appearance sake, In addition to the well placed dialogues. I love how you described the settings and following actions in a constructive manner to aid the readers in imagining the scene and Sceneries that at the same time also keeps us immersed and focused on what will happen next.I gotta say this writing style makes me remember Shadow Slave* by Guilty Three keep it up, and thank you for starting this ff. aside from the occasional spelling errors this is a 4.6 review for me.just because I haven't seen much further yet.
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This is excellent quality so far it has the potential to be one of the best danmachi fanfics and with there not being to much knowledge about the dungeon you can make new arcs in the story fit in really well
From what u have seen, this novel has mad potential. Good writing, good grammar, good story line. Seriously what more could you need. I just hope the author doesn’t drop it any time soon. It is one of the best Danmachi novels on webnovel right now, no cap. 👌👌