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DailyLife of the King: Campione
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Asahi Aito died in the accident and finds himself in a white room and met Oldman he saves in the accident and It turned out he was a God and gave him an offer to be reincarnated and he let out the Youngman of the worlds that spit out by gacha along with the skills.
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Crown_Ball is here! I'm here again so treat me nice especially my grammar haha, so I hope give me some advice
Btw I don't own anything I use from the other work except the OC I made in the future also I don't own the picture.
I made this for my fun and Spew out my Imagination in my brain.
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this....is really hurt to read, you need an actual editer, all dialogue is out of place,it feel.... stiff?, yeah that is a right word for this novel, hope your improvement may come soon.
I've been keeping this in the library hoping you'd come back and my efforts have paid off. Thanks for coming back!
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HAHAHA. Hi guys Crownball is here! to know that I'm shameless for rating full my own story haha. I hope you guys go EZ on me by sending here review even though I still continue this if its bad or not to you LOL