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Night City is a beast that devours the weak.

When he woke up in a run-down hospital, staring at a bruised, bandaged face in the mirror, he refused to believe it at first.

David Martinez.

The reckless kid who burned too bright and too fast, doomed to fall in a world that never gave second chances.

And now—he was him.

The crash. The trauma ward. Gloria Martinez’s impending death.
The Scavs waiting to carve her up like a piece of meat.

He knew what came next—and he refused to let it happen.

But what could a weak, unaugmented David Martinez do against the wolves of Night City?

DING!

[System binding complete. Welcome to Cyberpunk: The Fourth Calamity.]

A cold, synthetic voice echoed in his mind, and in that moment—everything changed.

The corpos, the mercs, the fixers, the gangs—
They have no idea what’s coming.

He won’t burn out.
He will burn them all.

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Slesk
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The dude who commented about zero stars has the right of it, if it were possible I'd give it negative stars. My biggest gripe so far is the utter dismissal of Original David with baseless shade, the dude just writes off all that the original did with comments about how 'weak his body is' or how "Life really isn't fair. Some people get top-tier implants, and others—like David—can barely handle the scraps." that is an actual quote by the way. Another quote for us is "The guy nearly died from a single military-grade implant!" in reference to David and the Apogee Sandy, a Sandy David just raw dogged multiple times per day like it was going out of style without worrying about medicine and was mostly fine until he started adding all manner of other chromes on top of. Anyways it feels like whomever wrote this is basing the story on their own imagined version of the anime because how they represent everything so far has been very unsatisfactory and out of line with the Edgerunners anime. I also haven't touched on the System and let me tell you so far I'm not impressed, first there wasn't any stats or character sheet when it was introduced, maybe in the future we'll get to see something like that but for now all it did was temporarily puppet his body, I think? It wasn't clear he seemed to be in control after a bit and just possessed the skill it supposedly gave, anyways it also hasn't had any effect besides that and seems like he hasn't paid any focus on that. It mentioned it was meant to help him become a legend but anyone who has seen the anime and inherits David's massive cojones (balls) can do that so long as they avoid the obvious and uses their in-setting knowledge to their advantage. Regardless I am very let down by what I've read so far and while I don't wish to put down the author I certainly am not liking the story so far, even if I'm not a David dick-rider, the sheer dismissal I'm seeing of what he accomplished kind of pisses me off to be honest. Hope it gets better but I'm not counting on it, peace y'all hope the reviews helps others.

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Alex_Kelian

Sorry but this is shit. If I could give you zero stars I would have done in a heartbeat. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Daniel_Roads

The author doesn’t know anything about the world he’s writing about next time at least watch the series

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AKASHIIIi

Some idiot gave zero stars without any explanation, so I'll just follow his example. /+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/++/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+//+/+/+/+/+/+/+/+/++/+/+/+/

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ShadyGod

Author doesn't actually know what he is writing about. Like a casual reader thinking he can direct the Star War movies, same level of neglect of characters and lore of the world itself. Author might as well make an entire new world with reference to the characters than a fanfic about Cyberpunk itself.

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ReMormo

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Taysh_Wall

the creator of this has definitely not seen anything about cyberpunk so this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑 this is trash 🗑

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immortal_sword

haven’t read it yet but everyone is dissing it so ima give 5 stars

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Lardeen
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5 star for me great beginning :) ///////

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