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Creati Hero: All-Father[Completed]
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Mokami Yaoyorozu, born as Momo's twin brother with advanced Quirk that allows him to create even living things. With the ability to change the structure of everything, he tries to become a hero in his second life.
But one day he sees his father's dark deeds and realizes rich people all around the globe are part of something big and dark. To protect his family and innocent, he starts to get stronger while scheme through their ranks, so he can destroy them from within.
Join Mokami in his exciting life!
What to expect;
Strong Romance; MC is romantic type of a guy that abhors to use women. There will be many women around him but he will woo them with love.
Harem(Incest); There will be many women from the anime and some OCs. Momo and their mother will also be part of the harem.
Slow Pace; It is not going to be meeting and fucking in an instant. I like to take my time and build up the romance before getting into the action so if you are looking for quick fucks, this story is not for you.
Strong but not Overpowered MC; He is always stronger than average but not omnipotent. Expect him to fallback and lose things just to rise on his feet stronger. Although the main theme is not power, the novel has some.
Some dark truths about world that may trigger you. Abuse of minors and worse. Never done by MC, will never be done MC but as MC discovers more about the Dark Organization, the nastier it will get. If you are a snowflake, I don't recommend you to read.
For now the publish schedule is a chapter on weekdays and two chapters on weekends.
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I think the mc needs to be older in the scene where he rewires his fathers mind. like 9-12 NOT 4. it gives time for his quirk to plausibly awaken like that(and makes it feel like he earned it.) You also immediately removed the only antagonist present removing all suspension for the period. I understand you want to audience to hate father but that'd be better achieved by having the abuse build up rather than having some mean words and this incident only where you just slapped the title of 'epstein product consumer' on him. The real issue is how mature the mc is talking to mother after this, literally giving her domestic abuse counselling. 1. this is eerie af and mc should act like a genius for his age, not an adult comforting a woman as a 4 year old. this is completely unreadable, any adult would be creeped the f out having a child say this. 2. Momo can't even talk properly yet (which makes the mc a creep instead and ruins any development the incident could have had on her character and the mc's relationship. You could improve this with minimal editing and maybe some earlier chapters to demonize father better than just outing him as a pedo. Anyhoozle, great novel concept—only reason I'm actually giving feedback. 5 stars if serious early issues addressed.
I have about 100 draft chapters and will continue to write, so you can expect a long read from this novel. Please read the auxiliary chapters to know what to expect from this novel lest you are triggered.
Story isn’t bad and neither is the grammar but i really disliked the main character’s personality.
First you need to understand father of the mc is a good guy in the canon ( main story / plot ) so don't truly hate him and for the sake of the story author made him seem as a bad person from the start so just to let you know .. .Not bad writing quality story development is in steady pace.character design is also okay .. I would not say it's fantastic / awesome but it's not bad . ( acceptable) world background is the same as we know with a little bit of twist .. it feels like mc didn't reincarnate in the mha world but different version of it with many different things from og Mha ( my hero academia )and obviously there's cultural stuff and mc has take responsibility for the family while his father is way.
Great story , the writing quality is good, the plot after some first chapter is logical with plausible and creative changes. As a fan of harem I rate the harem part 8/10. This is a slow pace story with an anti hero MC who good at using his brain, ruthless and very creative. You can think of him as a better version of Zeus that doesn't r@pe , has more brain cells and not as petty. The parts I dislike is how MC power was introduced in first chapters( it kinda too OP) and how the author too focus on Pedos crime
This is the third-best novel I have ever read. The first being MVS(of course). The second was one where the MC was reborn as a dungeon master and got a harem of legal lolis. A dragon girl a thousand years old and a vampire loli I don't remember her age though and a slime girl that wasn't legal so she wasn't a part of the harem.
It is good. I hate ff following the canon like a holy book and this is creative while keeping the good points of the series. ı would like better if there were more chapters but a chapter a day is good enough. Can't complain about that. Good job author. Keep it up
Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls.
The story is interesting, this fanfic has some better things than the original story, which is over for now. Does anyone know of any other fanfic that has Mirko (rabbit) as the main character's heroine? Looking and only found 1 that has Mirko (Rumi Usagiyama).
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Seems really nice, my only problem is that there are too many r 18 scenes that are also too long. May have dropped it but still, good work Author👍
Keeping the bloodline pure- Check Amazing Plot- Check Smart Mc- Check Although I would want more chappies, I know it is not easy to write them, sooooooo. I wish I could support the author but I am poor, sad face. Anyways, goood!
Very good the mc is quite the villain but hes a good person since he isnt relying to spoiler use his special powers to control people other than that one time when he needed to
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The premise is good 4/5 as the seggs was rushed for making the mc sigma lol. it was not needed at all. Let's see where author takes the romance of the mom,sister and other UA girls.
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Truthfully your synopsis got me hooked. So I look forward to it~ ............................................................................................
Thanks for the Fanfic~ Completing a fanfic of this length is quite the achievement, so congracts on being part of the 1% of Authors who don't drop mid way. I'm not sure where to start..... But this was amazing. I loved every bit of it, and the ending was pretty good. (before this, sorry it's so long and I know I sound like I'm complaining a lot - but I really did love this, these are only things that stuck out to me, which although I've yapped on, isn't all that many problems considering how long the Fanfic is and how many ways it could have gone wrong) The only criticisms I have is I wish there was a little more info on the body enhancements. Not much, mind you, just a bit more - like the first one with the energy storing organ was amazing, but after that they were mostly glossed over before a decent explanation when (if I remember right) Toru Hagakure and Mina Ashido got their enhancements, but otherwise, it wasn't quite given enough explanation, nor about the others he gave it to like how with All Might it wasn't really shown. Even if it was only a little - like another 250 words, a bit more explanation and a mentioning of enhancements given to others would have been nice. And for my second part: The rushed ending. I mean, I get why you did it - you did explain after all, but the Festival Arc would have been nice to see - even if it was rushed, and the ending on I-Island and after was too rushed imo. Like I wouldn't say you needed the 50-100 more chapters like you said, but extending that by even 10 would have been nice, and the aftermath - I think the whole thing with the Guardians could have been expanded upon better rather than a timeskip where he long surpassed them, like maybe a fight against one of them, a real challenge for which the MC would have to put everything on the line - to truly be pushed in a 1 on 1 fight as we never really saw that, like it was explained how he can make stuff not even All Might could break and it was shown how the MC could beat powerful people, but never against powerhouses like AFO, All Might, or stronger apart from the USJ with the Nomu and the Final Exams VS All Might where neither side really went all out. Even if not a full arc, just a shorter one against a Guardian or against Egypt after the whole thing of running away from there would have been nice. Oh yeah, another talk with Nezu would have been cool, since the MC hasn't been shown to have talked since the escape from Egypt. Heck, you could have had the big fight on I-Island, after all, the quirk enhancing helmet device was just sitting there - if I-Island from the Movie exists, surely the device does too, so it could have been used to power up someone like one of the Guardian things of I-island (not the international ones), or even on All For One - possibly forcing the MC to retreat and build up his forces and plan for one final onslaught against a nearly unbeatable AFO. Another small problem I had was Nejire. I liked her, but after the childhood part, she was sidelined - hardly even mentioned and only rarely interacted with the MC. I mean, I fully understand why - there are a LOT of characters and just as many girls, but as one of the ones that was there since the start, I just expected her to be present a bit more than she was...... Though, that's probably more down to my preference and many others would think the same for another character, or have wished one was less relevant The only other problem I had was the MC's morals and thoughts. A lot of the time, it was rather ambiguous - during the middle of the Fanfic especially, I often felt that he was more evil than an anti-hero, like he gave off those vibes a lot - it was hard to tell and we didn't get too much insight into his thoughts. It wasn't anything too bad, just a bit confusing at times. (Once again, I want to make it clear I'm not hating on the story in any way and I know for a fact I couldn't make one a tenth as good - I'm simply saying a couple of things I thought could have been better, but I don't mean it to sound a fifth as bad as what I've probably written this to sound like - all ot this were very minor problems). Other than that, I really had no problems with it. I loved this enough to binge it over the last 2 or 3 days - something very few fanfics of more than 80K words can get me to do. Once again, I loved this story and I absolutely plan to re-read it sometime in the future. Thanks!
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