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James is a writer who was dumped by his girlfriend. Right now he's in the lowest position in his life. Through his depression and see the dark side of people. He meets with peoples who will change his life.
While he struggles with his problem, he realizes now he can see people from their hearts. He can see everybody have their gut underneath their smiles.
James also learned new perspective while struggle with his mental health. He and others will gives us their mind and though.
Can James survive with his depression and write again?
Every people have their problem and depression behind their smiles. Everyone will show their darkness from their heart.
He give us the other perspective of live! You'll see the other side of their mentality and depression!
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is this a biography? because if it is, I'm just stunned by the writing and experiences, the reader doesn't get a brief glimpse but an in depth exploration of the MC's struggle with mental health. I'm just stunned, This is metaphorical in a beautiful ways and painful to read too, i wanna see more though! post more !!!! keep me notified
What a story! You give us some wonderful story with excellent analogy. Your had grammatical error in the first chapter but the recent and newest chap is fine. Keep workin and good luck
My first genuine review. I don't know why this story got me hooked up, just read a few chapters and I can't stop reading it maybe I got a thing for drama and stuff, anyways the story is pretty good and I'm loving the suspense it's giving me and its really really really really really great
Wonderful, the first chapter is drag me over to the others. This is just perfect, although there some grammatical error but you get better on the recent chap, the grammar was fine. Keep up! Good luck!
AMAZING!!! I can't even begin to comprehend what I read just over the first chapter!!! It was very engaging and well thought out. It definitely keeps you entertained, and makes you keep your attention on it. You can't forget where you left off, even after reading a bunch of other novels!!! I thought the storyline was very well written and developed as well. I thought the beginning could've been a little more descriptive though, I just didn't understand who this character was at first. I also always recommend checking the grammar, us authors always struggle with this!!! Can't wait to read more, and see how the story develops more later on!!! I would like to mention I am the user BellsandLexShow from the forum!!!
This is a heartbreaking story. The male character is filled with sadness in the starting chapters that makes one wonder how will he cope up with his problems while not affecting his work. Anyway, the plot is good but the story needs some editing in some paragraphs to make the story better. Overall, it's enjoyable to read. Keep it up author! :)
This is a great story. It's very relatable and I really connected personally with this one. It's realistic but also hopeful and inspiring. (5/5)
I haven't read many novels with slice of life, and so I am very interested. it's a good book. I love the character development and feel sorry that he's going through such hard times. Hope to see more.
The Good: Excellent story with a very strong attention to the emotions attached with loss. The author does a great job of helping the reader feel everything as intended! The paragraph structure is done well so the story flows smoothly without having long paragraphs or short stuttering ones. The Bad: As great as the structure is, the grammar is just... barely passable... Many times tenses get switched within the same sentence accidentally or the wrong verb tense is used period. Punctuation needs a bit of help but that should come with the grammar. While I feel this is a great story, I feel like it is hard to digest with how often I find myself double-backing to reread things due to the grammar mistakes. The Neutral: Overall, excellent work and great story. I feel like you are improving a little with each chapter, but I still think verb tenses are really giving you trouble. Keep at it though and give Grammarly a try if you are still struggling with verb tenses.
It's good start to a story. dark, yet, compelling.. the author takes you through emotional downs of the main character through imagination.. Read it. It just might be your cup of tea!!!
Wow this is a good book :D The writing is amazing and smooth, me likey! Although there are a few grammatical errors, but it okie hehe <3 My favorite part about this book is how the author portrayed the characters' feelings and emotions. It's very immersive ayeee Great job, author! <3
Breakups are always a mess. Reading chp one, I got to know the writer.someone must have experienced that to write that scene. Keep up the good work, but still brush up your writing.
This is an interesting story with an interesting MC, i admit its heart breaking sometimes and the MC is depressed in the first few chapters but that just shows you how much character development he's going to attain later. Edit some grammar and spelling errors though. Good work author
This is an excellent story; I like the characters and how they grow. Also, I like how the writer pours his skeptical and unusual thought.
It's an interesting story. I find these types of stories depressing, but you did a really good job with the topic. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Good job.
Okay, here is my review! Something I think this novel does really well that a lot of others don't is really make you feel. Whether that be by the actions of the characters, or the detailed imagery, it is one of the more emotive novels I have seen for a while, and I think that may be due to its realism. Its a pleasure to read something so grounded and something that feels like the author has put a lot of time and effort into crafting. I love the dynamics of the characters, each one was unique and developed well. I think in order for me to give it a full 5 stars I would like to see a bit more variation in sentence length and a few grammar corrections just so the story flows nicer. There were also a few times things felt like they should be more dramatic, such as Christy's breakup, but because I didn't know much about the character or their history, it didn't have the effect I was looking for. Overall however, a very nice read. Great work!
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This is amazing. You did a very good job. I love when you give the other chara point of view. Keep up your good work, you give a deep meaning and thought. You make me think :)
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Like the other reviews the MC is quite relatable. The author does a solid job at explaining the MC's pain and his reactions are very realistic. There are some grammatical and spelling errors but nothing that would take away from the novel. Altogether has great potential, keep writing!
Is this somecopy work because i feel i have read or seen this somewhere before. But good story with a lot of room for development. Keep on writing 😁😁😁😁😁
This is a good story with a slice of life. The main character is quite depressed since the beginning but he is somehow relatable! I look forward to see how the ML life goes on and his love life too😄😄